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  • #16
    Re: English-Writing Competition....

    Originally posted by barg.e.gul
    here I am Aania,
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    When you were born, you were crying
    and everyone around you was smiling

    Live your life in such a way, that
    when you die,
    you r the one smiling, and
    everyone one around you is crying

    Life is itself a precious gift, that everyone live in a different way but some ppl live it in a v special way, with full of aims and full of happiness.

    I once asked my friend what she thinks about "Life", she didnt say anything but "Smiled".At that time I coudnt see wat there was exactly behind her "smile".Infact I never had time to think, as I used to be v occupied....
    Occupied?--------yes, in struggling....I was running for something Impossible, I wont go into any detail of wat it was exactly coz it is another story, but simply I never knew what "Life" is in its true sense.

    Its true that I was struggling v hard but in a wrong way....

    justuju jis ki thi us ko to na paya hum ney
    is bahaaney sey magar deykh li dunya hum ney

    then I took a break and started asking myself diff. qs, I started observing ppls approach and attitude towards different things and that of mine...

    and then I realised that "Life" actually means struggle and hardwork but this time these two words sounds different...

    It means that our duty is to continue working and working honestly and sincerely,leaving the results for Allah.If we have strong faith then there is only one thing to remember and that is "a prayer of muslim can even change his fortune.

    Now i know wat there was behind that delicate "Smile".If I am asked to say it in a single line, my answer will be...

    "Smile, coz Life is beautiful"



    10/12/05
    22h45

    Great ... contribution Gul thnx u so much.... :hug:
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    • #17
      Re: English-Writing Competition....

      Unbroken Life Story




      It was a particular day in the class room of Giridih College, a city college 3 km far from the town. Julie was A rank brilliant student of all the students in class, herself proud and over confident student, for the first time in her life, she stood in the second in the Terminal Examination, her arrogance was crushed, just she was defeated by Raj. Julie was plunged down, her record was broken in the Terminal Examination.



      As time went on they gradually discovered the basic qualities of their opponents, and even one become the admirer of the other.



      Russy the eldest sister of Julie was the first person to notice that a deep love had developed between her sister & Raj, she broke out in family and one evening as usual Raj entered to keep promise for one gaze of his dearest, Uncle shouted him, first of all given him an insulting class, then warned him do not enter.



      Raj found a better prospective job in Czech Republic, before leaving country he desired to meet Julie. On an autumn evening of 2002 when the orange tint of the setting sun had spread its magic spell upon everything they could manage to meet at a fixed point of Madhuban, a Family Treat Hotel. They talked and made promise to be unit, both dreamt of nothing but goodness and innocent joys of LIFE and said good bye each other.

      Raj had settled at Belehradska - 58 street, in Praha.

      Later one year, he received downhearted news, the news which traumatized his heart, Julie had been married in Kolkata.

      Raj is still out of country.
      Khandar wafa ka yaaro kured kar dekh lo
      Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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      • #18
        Re: English-Writing Competition....

        Originally posted by Spy009
        Unbroken Life Story




        It was a particular day in the class room of Giridih College, a city college 3 km far from the town. Julie was A rank brilliant student of all the students in class, herself proud and over confident student, for the first time in her life, she stood in the second in the Terminal Examination, her arrogance was crushed, just she was defeated by Raj. Julie was plunged down, her record was broken in the Terminal Examination.



        As time went on they gradually discovered the basic qualities of their opponents, and even one become the admirer of the other.



        Russy the eldest sister of Julie was the first person to notice that a deep love had developed between her sister & Raj, she broke out in family and one evening as usual Raj entered to keep promise for one gaze of his dearest, Uncle shouted him, first of all given him an insulting class, then warned him do not enter.



        Raj found a better prospective job in Czech Republic, before leaving country he desired to meet Julie. On an autumn evening of 2002 when the orange tint of the setting sun had spread its magic spell upon everything they could manage to meet at a fixed point of Madhuban, a Family Treat Hotel. They talked and made promise to be unit, both dreamt of nothing but goodness and innocent joys of LIFE and said good bye each other.

        Raj had settled at Belehradska - 58 street, in Praha.

        Later one year, he received downhearted news, the news which traumatized his heart, Julie had been married in Kolkata.

        Raj is still out of country.



        wow really wonderfull ... spy Paa ji.. khush raho...

        really a
        wesome man.... :rose :rose :rose :rose


        Did u write it all by urself... just a question... ab tak kahan the???? me ki yaad nahen aayee kabhi...???
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        • #19
          Re: English-Writing Competition....

          Originally posted by Aania
          I’ve too much to write about life & life’s experiences, life doesn’t last with sunset, doesn’t ends with passed autumn, doesn’t stop with thunder or lightening but ends with the last breath. The sun rises, sets, springs boost to blossom flora, rain uplift green meadows, though all these natural margay rotates on its time but with its turning slides flash over phenomenal memorize some special events of past.


          wow really wonderfull ... spy Paa ji.. khush raho...

          really a
          wesome man.... :rose :rose :rose :rose


          Did u write it all by urself... just a question... ab tak kahan the???? me ki yaad nahen aayee kabhi...???
          Copy paste…ha ha ha, joking,

          Did you read all or formality dropped reply

          Actually I didn’t find a competent, and I think who will be bothered if I post such type of unparalleled fictions, that’s why never preferred to post here.
          Last edited by Spy009; 14 December 2005, 13:49.
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          Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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          • #20
            Re: English-Writing Competition....

            Originally posted by Spy009

            Did you read all or formality dropped reply


            DWDLJG ki story lagi me ko.... lekin starting achi di... I mean kuch kuch bohat kuch wesa ich hai... :khi:
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            • #21
              Re: English-Writing Competition....

              Originally posted by Aania
              DWDLJG ki story lagi me ko.... lekin starting achi di... I mean kuch kuch bohat kuch wesa ich hai... :khi:
              Believe me this is true story, and now I would like to share more true happenings

              keep patience
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              Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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              • #22
                Re: English-Writing Competition....

                I'm not that good in writing, but have written little on life about my views.

                ********************* LIFE *********************

                People say Life is a precious Gift, a journey, a challenge, a struggle, a tragedy, a game





                Saima Shaheen




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                • #23
                  Re: English-Writing Competition....

                  Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                  I'm not that good in writing, but have written little on life about my views.


                  Excellent menacles of words Saima, YOU'RE good in writing.




                  Saima Shaheen




                  Off course we should be constent whatever in life to lead a happily life

                  Thanks Saima
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                  Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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                  • #24
                    Re: English-Writing Competition....

                    Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                    I'm not that good in writing, but have written little on life about my views.

                    ********************* LIFE *********************

                    People say Life is a precious Gift, a journey, a challenge, a struggle, a tragedy, a game





                    Saima Shaheen





                    wow... nice thought Saima... .. for sure... u know how to write...
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                    • #25
                      Re: English-Writing Competition....

                      Originally posted by Spy009
                      Believe me this is true story, and now I would like to share more true happenings

                      keep patience
                      bring more... from ur surroundings... It ll be great to know all... :rose
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                      • #26
                        Re: English-Writing Competition....

                        Originally posted by Spy009
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                        Excellent menacles of words Saima, YOU'RE good in writing.



                        Off course we should be constent whatever in life to lead a happily life

                        Thanks Saima

                        Thnx Spy, nice of you to say so :ff:

                        But U thanked me for wht ??? :cc:
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                        • #27
                          Re: English-Writing Competition....

                          Originally posted by Aania
                          wow... nice thought Saima... .. for sure... u know how to write...

                          Thnx A lot Dear for such encouraging comments :)


                          Its really sweet of you :phool:
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                          • #28
                            Re: English-Writing Competition....

                            Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                            :ff:

                            But U thanked me for wht ??? :cc:

                            For sharing of spoke out
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                            Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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                            • #29
                              Re: English-Writing Competition....

                              Originally posted by Spy009
                              For sharing of spoke out
                              Welcome Not :p
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                              • #30
                                Re: English-Writing Competition....

                                Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                                Welcome Not :p
                                Then 4 KNOT
                                Khandar wafa ka yaaro kured kar dekh lo
                                Hamarey naam ka patthar zaroor milega

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