ham bichaR jaayieN to......

[*Hijab*]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

wow:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

waah bahot khoobsurat Ghazal janab nice

[thefire1]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

wasi sahab aik baar phir shukriya, kay aap kay taaqub main hum nay yeh khoobsurat kalaam bhi paRh lia...

Kia khoobsurat rang barangi tehreer hay.... jitnay rang iss tehreer kay back ground main hain utnay hi rang iss tehreer main shaamil hay, judai, furqat, yaad, tanhayi, ashk, chandni raat, touhmat.... har ek rang numaaya hay, aur ghoum phir kar baat srif aur srif aik hi rang ko munfarid kar rahi hay yaa jis kay ird gird ghoom rahi hay "rang-e-mohabbat" jis ka maqtay main bohat hi achay andaaz say zikr hay.... wah bohat khoob, itna khoosburat likhnay kay liye har ek rang ko samajhna bohat zaroori hota hay.... hum nay tou srif paRh kar apni rai paish kar di asal kaam tou uss qalm ka hay jis per dil aur dimagh say mehsoos hotay huway alfaz saaday warq per qalamband hogayay aur saari dastaan-e-hayat chand lamhoon main manzar-e-aam aagayi...

bohat khoob, isi tarhan apni khoobsurat tehreeron say humain mustafeed karti rahain. Khush rahyeh :)

[zmufti]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

wow:rose

jeeti raho
aur khush raho

[zmufti]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

waah bahot khoobsurat Ghazal janab nice

shukria wasi saheb

[zmufti]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

wasi sahab aik baar phir shukriya, kay aap kay taaqub main hum nay yeh khoobsurat kalaam bhi parh lia...

Kia khoobsurat rang barangi tehreer hay.... Jitnay rang iss tehreer kay back ground main hain utnay hi rang iss tehreer main shaamil hay, judai, furqat, yaad, tanhayi, ashk, chandni raat, touhmat.... Har ek rang numaaya hay, aur ghoum phir kar baat srif aur srif aik hi rang ko munfarid kar rahi hay yaa jis kay ird gird ghoom rahi hay "rang-e-mohabbat" jis ka maqtay main bohat hi achay andaaz say zikr hay.... Wah bohat khoob, itna khoosburat likhnay kay liye har ek rang ko samajhna bohat zaroori hota hay.... Hum nay tou srif parh kar apni rai paish kar di asal kaam tou uss qalm ka hay jis per dil aur dimagh say mehsoos hotay huway alfaz saaday warq per qalamband hogayay aur saari dastaan-e-hayat chand lamhoon main manzar-e-aam aagayi...

Bohat khoob, isi tarhan apni khoobsurat tehreeron say humain mustafeed karti rahain. Khush rahyeh :)

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والسلام
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[Mani16]

Re: ham bichaR jaayieN to......

Great Awesome
Bht zabardust
Khush rahen or hamare sath apni poetry share kerte rehen