andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

[zmufti]

[Masood]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Bohat umdah Zarqa har shair mein apnaiyat ki jhalak hai bohat umdah likhti ho - khush raho aur achha achha likhti raho...

waisey aik baat hai ishq mein ruswaii na ho to ishq nahin hota ....

[zmufti]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Bohat umdah Zarqa har shair mein apnaiyat ki jhalak hai bohat umdah likhti ho - khush raho aur achha achha likhti raho...

waisey aik baat hai ishq mein ruswaii na ho to ishq nahin hota ....

shukria masood saheb
khush rahiye

[Gul]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Buhat khoob Zaraqa jee aap Ko yehan B Parh kar buhat acha laga...:) khush rahiyay

[zmufti]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Buhat khoob Zaraqa jee aap Ko yehan B Parh kar buhat acha laga...:) khush rahiyay

Huma jee
aap ki muhabbat ka shukria
take care
zmufti

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

aap ny likha hay k kia huga...........

aur mujy yakeen hay k ager ap wakee poet hain jo kisi kee copy nahi kerty
to aap yeh lazmi janty hugy k
es ka hal kia huga......
koi k poet jab koi baat kehta hay to zaror sara plot os k zehan main huta hay...
jaisa Iqbal ka shikwa k baad jawab shikwa
any way i like ur poetryImpressive:em:

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

wah kya baat hai.
very lovely :rose

[zmufti]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

aap ny likha hay k kia huga...........

aur mujy yakeen hay k ager ap wakee poet hain jo kisi kee copy nahi kerty
to aap yeh lazmi janty hugy k
es ka hal kia huga......
koi k poet jab koi baat kehta hay to zaror sara plot os k zehan main huta hay...
jaisa Iqbal ka shikwa k baad jawab shikwa
any way i like ur poetryImpressive:em:

shukria Khalil saheb
aap ne baja farmaya poet ke zehn maiN plot hota hai
magar qaari ke sochne ke liye bhee to kuch choRna chahiye na
regards
zmufti

[*Rida*]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
wah.......kia baat hai .....buht hi rawani say aur khobsorat lokhti hain aap...

[zmufti]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

wah kya baat hai.
very lovely :rose

shukria
khush rahiye

[zmufti]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
wah.......kia baat hai .....buht hi rawani say aur khobsorat lokhti hain aap...

shukria Rida jee

[fazal khan]

Re: andeshe(...to kyaa hoga)

Bahut he zabardast,,,bary arsy ke baad koi aisa kalam parhny ko mila hai,,,,dil karta hai,bar bar parhty jain,,,,,
very nice,,,,,
:clap::clap::clap: