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[thefire1]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

Bohat hi khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayan.. mujhay afsoos iss baat kay pehlay kiyon nahin paRha magar khushi iss baat ki kay itna aaala mayar-e-shaaeri paRhnay say miss nahin hua, shukriya wasi anjum ka kay unn kay peechay peechay main nay bhi iss ghazal jo kay nazm ki si sourat hay ko open kar kay paRh lia..

kia tareef karoon iss ki, sab pehlay hi itna kuch keh chukay hain.... main nay iss tehreer ko baar baar paRha aur sochta raha kay kaun sa shaair haasil-e-ghazal hosakta hay, sabhi shair bohat hi umda magar woh shaair jo waqayi dil kay taroon ko cho gaya aur zindagi dainay ka pegham day gaya woh hay
Khasaaray Kay Sabhi Souday Kiye Thay Umr Bhar Hum Nay
Magar Yon Hee Muqaddar Per Humesha Naam Dhrtay Thay

Kitni sachayi hay aap kay qalaam main bilkhusoos iss shair main kay insaan ghalitian khudh hi karta hau aur aakhir main qismat ya muqaddar ko uss ka zimaydaar theraata hay, humari haalaat humari hi achayi aur burayi ka nateeja hain, bas aap jaisay acha dil aur achi soch honi chayeh usay samajhnay aur samjhaanay kay liye...

Isi tarhan apni khoosburat tehreer say humain nawaztay rahay, bohat kuch souchnay aur samajhnay ka mouqa milta hay.

Khush rahyeh :)

[zmufti]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

oh my goodness
it's amazing
superb

shukria hijaab
khush raho
wasalam
zarqa

[zmufti]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

zarqa ji

i am speachless. itna khubsorat itna dard bhara........... aap nay tu mera dil hi nikal liya

khush rahain

umaima

umaima jii
isse paRhne ke liye aap ki mamnoon huuN
khush rahiye
wasalam
zarqa

[zmufti]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

Amazinggggggggggggggggg
Bht He zavbardust janab

aap ka buhat shukria
khush rahiye

[zmufti]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

waah janab bahot khoobsurat Ghazal kahi hai aap ne
Daad qabool kijiye

shukria Wasi saheb
khush rahiye
wasalam
zarqa

[zmufti]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

Bohat hi khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayan.. mujhay afsoos iss baat kay pehlay kiyon nahin paRha magar khushi iss baat ki kay itna aaala mayar-e-shaaeri paRhnay say miss nahin hua, shukriya wasi anjum ka kay unn kay peechay peechay main nay bhi iss ghazal jo kay nazm ki si sourat hay ko open kar kay paRh lia..

kia tareef karoon iss ki, sab pehlay hi itna kuch keh chukay hain.... main nay iss tehreer ko baar baar paRha aur sochta raha kay kaun sa shaair haasil-e-ghazal hosakta hay, sabhi shair bohat hi umda magar woh shaair jo waqayi dil kay taroon ko cho gaya aur zindagi dainay ka pegham day gaya woh hay
Khasaaray Kay Sabhi Souday Kiye Thay Umr Bhar Hum Nay
Magar Yon Hee Muqaddar Per Humesha Naam Dhrtay Thay

Kitni sachayi hay aap kay qalaam main bilkhusoos iss shair main kay insaan ghalitian khudh hi karta hau aur aakhir main qismat ya muqaddar ko uss ka zimaydaar theraata hay, humari haalaat humari hi achayi aur burayi ka nateeja hain, bas aap jaisay acha dil aur achi soch honi chayeh usay samajhnay aur samjhaanay kay liye...

Isi tarhan apni khoosburat tehreer say humain nawaztay rahay, bohat kuch souchnay aur samajhnay ka mouqa milta hay.

Khush rahyeh :)

maiN samajhti huuN ke mera kalam itni taareef ke qaabil nahiN
aap ki be had mamnoon huuN ke aap ne is per tabsara kiyya
khush rahiye
wasalam
zarqa

[Mani16]

Re: .....sitaare raqs karte the

sari Ghazal Khoob Hy But last shair is awesome
Boht Boht Boht Pasand I Ghazal Or Specialy Makta Is 2 Fit,

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