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  • Jag toN sohne..!!

    Asslmaoalikum
    sajno aay punjabi zubaan wich main pehli ghazal likhi jay.....zara dasso te sai ki ki khamyaN nein :)
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    Allah

  • #2
    Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

    wah ji zaberdast bhai

    tusi te koi v kam kar sakde ho ;)

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    • #3
      Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

      AOA,

      Wah ji:masha barra sonrra te wadiya ghazal likhi kigal a tawadi:) :rose :thmbup:


      Sohail Abbasi.
      Apna haq ada karo.

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      • #4
        Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

        mujhy panjabi nahi atiii .:bhago:....well app ka pehla koshish kamyab haii :thmbup:
        u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

        :pr:

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        • #5
          Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

          Yaaram boht hi zaberdast..........zuban koi bhi ho sachai ka byan ussay khubsurati bakhsh deta hey........aap ne aik haqeeqat ko lafzon mein dhaala hey aur boht hi ahsan tareeqay se apni iss kawish ko zaberdast bana diya hey.

          hunn likhna chadd nah daiyo,ok? likhday rahwo tay saday naal share v kerday rahwo. husdat rahwo tay wassday rahwo:)

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          • #6
            Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

            Assalaam o alekum,


            :cc: :cc: :cc: :cc: :cc:
            :tang: RISK IS MY BUSINESS

            DANGER IS MY GAME

            DONT PLAY WITH ME
            BCOZ KHURRAM IS MY NAME :tang:

            Kisi nien bhi to naa dekha nigaah bher ke Mujhe

            Gaya phir aaj kaa din bhi udaas ker ke mujhe

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            • #7
              Re: Meri Pehli Koshish..!!

              TUwada saryaN da bohat shukrya :)
              Allah

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              • #8
                Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                Adnan ji tusi aiy kalaam kamaal da likha aiy.bouhti rawaani tay kitthay vi koi kami maisoos nai hondi.baar baar parhday vi nai thakdi mainu bouhti changi lagi aiy. tusi hun punjabi wich vi likha karo:) :masha Allah nay tuwaanu salahiyat bakhsi aiy tay tusi es da istimaal vi changa kar raey ho.bouhti pasand aai mainu. hun sadi wakhri punjabi wichon likha jawaab vi parh chado k main koshish kardi aan aaundi tay nai aiy na kadi seekhi aiy.khud hi lagi rehndi aan. :lol
                :roseENIGMA:rose

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                • #9
                  Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                  aho bohat changa jwab dita jey tusi.....tuwanoN te changi pali punjabi aondi aay.......tusi vi koshish karo na :)
                  Allah

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                  • #10
                    Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                    aye haye.....

                    dil percha ke tur jaandey nen
                    laa ke jhootey laarey lok....


                    wow zabardast Aadi

                    bohat hi vadiya shairy keeti jey...
                    Allah karey..tusi sadaa hi khush raho....aameen.
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                    • #11
                      Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                      Adnan ji bouhti shukriya main insha Allah koshish karaan gi par mainu nai lagda k main likh sakaan gi.es liye k punjabi wich likhnay k liye vi zubaan tay aboor zaroori aiy tay naal lafzaan da zakheera vi oh main kithon lawaan gi.:cc:
                      :roseENIGMA:rose

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                      • #12
                        Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                        Originally posted by hayaa_n
                        Adnan ji bouhti shukriya main insha Allah koshish karaan gi par mainu nai lagda k main likh sakaan gi.es liye k punjabi wich likhnay k liye vi zubaan tay aboor zaroori aiy tay naal lafzaan da zakheera vi oh main kithon lawaan gi.:cc:
                        Mujhey Khushi ho gi agar aap likhein gi to :)
                        Allah

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                        • #13
                          Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                          Originally posted by Aania
                          aye haye.....

                          dil percha ke tur jaandey nen
                          laa ke jhootey laarey lok....


                          wow zabardast Aadi

                          bohat hi vadiya shairy keeti jey...
                          Allah karey..tusi sadaa hi khush raho....aameen.
                          Ameen aur bohat ziada shukray aap ka pasand kane ka :)
                          Allah

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                          • #14
                            Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                            pehlii kaawish hi itnii zabardast hy to aakhrii kaisii ho gii?

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                            • #15
                              Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

                              Originally posted by baad-e-saba
                              pehlii kaawish hi itnii zabardast hy to aakhrii kaisii ho gii?
                              SABA yahi Pehli aur Aakhri koshish thi.....is ke baad punjabii mian kuch nahi likha :(
                              Allah

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