Jag toN sohne..!!

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

SABA yahi Pehli aur Aakhri koshish thi.....is ke baad punjabii mian kuch nahi likha :(

Mery khyaal main aap ko mazeed likhna chaahiy Punjaabi main :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Mery khyaal main aap ko mazeed likhna chaahiy Punjaabi main :)

Saba yeh sab waqt waqt ki baat hoti hay yeh jo aap sab nazmeiN aur ghazleiN parh rahi haiN .....yeh Bohat Pehle LIkhi gayi thiN.......ab bohat kam ya kabhi kabahr mashq-e-sukhan hoti hai :rose

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Saba yeh sab waqt waqt ki baat hoti hay yeh jo aap sab nazmeiN aur ghazleiN parh rahi haiN .....yeh Bohat Pehle LIkhi gayi thiN.......ab bohat kam ya kabhi kabahr mashq-e-sukhan hoti hai :rose

Chaleen umeed rakhty hain ky shaaed FUTURe main kuchh aur achhiii achhii shaaerii kii aap sy :phool:

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Jee keu nai :) InshAllah

[haziq]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Mat mila kar udaas logon say
Husn tera bikhar na jaae kahin
dukhaan tay dardaan aalin aastay ik bova hali v khula a kadi othay v ja k waikho sarkar.

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

bohot achchah jee tuaddey khialaat bauut sondey ney,allah tuaaddey zor-e-qalam nu hore vi uchcha karey

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Bohat shukrya bhai :)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Bahoot khoob yaaram
nice poetry

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Shukrya

[Gul]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Tussi aay dasoo k hor ki ki nai karday :)
Buhat achi sha`eri aur buhat mukamal punjabi ...
.Buhat khoobsoorat aur Flow b ek dum fluent ...
Lutaf aa giya bhai jee ...but yeh saifal koan hai ?

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Tussi aay dasoo k hor ki ki nai karday :)

Buhat achi sha`eri aur buhat mukamal punjabi ...
.Buhat khoobsoorat aur Flow b ek dum fluent ...

Lutaf aa giya bhai jee ...but yeh saifal koan hai ?

Thank u very much ke aap ko yeh likha hua pasand aaya - aap ka husn-e-nazr hay - aur han sis yeh SaiFuL kisi waqt main mera takhllus hua karta tha:rose

[Life is Alone]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

bohatt achi nazam likhi hai..:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Shukrya Ambreen, yeh ghazal hay :khi:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

sab choro ye sefal kon hay

[Yaaram]

Re: Jag toN sohne..!!

Hmmm Yeh bohat pehle mera takhlus hota tha,