Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

nice

FeamanAllah

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

nice

FeamanAllah

Shukrya Bheegi Palkein :)

[muskaan]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

acha jee bari koshish karte hain ke kam ho lekan ........

kam dard kaisai hoga jab aap dard ko janai nahi dain gai :rose

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

yeh bhi sahi hay...........kaash yeh humare hath main hota

[hayaa_n]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Itnay umda kalaam par kiya daad du'n?:masha khoob likhtay hain aur har tehreer hi dil ko chu laiti hay.:masha :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Haya jee bohat shukrya pazeerayi ka :)

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Excellent

aap ki tamaam shaaerii padhii, buhat achhaa likhty hain aap :phool:

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Bari nawazish .......Aap ne time nikaal kar humara sara kalam parha aur pasand bhi kya
Aap ki pazeerayi aur dili daad ke leye A had mamnoon hoN :rose

[aik_lerki]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Bohat he zabardast likha hai aap nay Yaaram :rose
Keep It Up

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Bohat shukrya Komal :rose

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

bohth khoob nice thanks for shairimng,.,

[Yaaram]

Re: Meri Udaasi mujh se poochti hay..!!

Bohat shukrya Lexicon :rose