IK Tabasum chahiye.....

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

Assalamualikum ,

Hahaha ..... Mein ne pm mein kaha tha na ke aap ki tahreer mein garbar hai . aap Arooz wo baghath ka muta'liya kijiye .... toh aap ne kis Tursh royi se jawaab diya tha yaad hai aap KO ....? aap janne ki koshish toh kartey ke kia nuqs hai tum mein batadeti .... bajaye aap ne khami janney ke ulta hi jawaab de diya tha , yaad kijye apne alfaaz ....
aap ki tahreer mein nuqs paya jata hai ...Arooz mein Ayoob-e-Qafiya ke taheth....isi liye mein ne aap ko yahan poin out karne ke bajaye Pm mein mashwara diya tha ke is tarha aap ke ilm mein ifaza bhi hoga.....

Walekum Asslam

Bahot shukriya aap ka milestone
mene PM mein aap ko koi aisa tarsh jawab nahi diya tha
mene yahi likha tha na k mere mann mein jo aata hai wahi likhta
hon aur bas ye kaha tha k mene kisi se islah bhi karai thi
us k bawajood bhi ager aap ko kuch bura laga to sorry

[milestone]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

Assalamualikum ,

aur kaha tha ke unhone kaha ke padhne mein rawani hai . toh phir ab kahan gai rawani ..... haan mujhe mahsoos hua .... ke aap ke dil mein koi khalish hai .
sorry ki zaroorath nahi .

[Gul]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

Thanx Gul

hmm khas baat to hai jo aap ne dhoond li hai is ghazal mein
mene apni ghazlen jo likhta hon waisay he post ker deta hon
ye Ghazal mene kisi se islah karwai thi so kuch farq aa raha hai
bahot shukriya
khush Rahen

Jee Wasi ...yehan koi b perfect nahi ...
har kisi ko seekhnay ka amal jaari rakhna hai ..

aur jo samjhtay hein k wo sab jaantay hein
wo B kuch nahi jaantay ...!!
ELm ki na tu hadd hai aur naa hee koi ....inteha..!

Baqii darjaat zaroor hein ...!
aap ka intehaai khoobsoorat kalam ..kaam hum sabhi deykh chukay hein
so ..!! :thmbup: No Worries :insha:

[Soulmate]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

buhat acha shairi hai wasi bhai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

Assalamualikum ,

aur kaha tha ke unhone kaha ke padhne mein rawani hai . toh phir ab kahan gai rawani ..... haan mujhe mahsoos hua .... ke aap ke dil mein koi khalish hai .
sorry ki zaroorath nahi .

unhon jis style mein perhi hogi unhen rawani lagi, aap ko nahi lagi rawani to theek hai mujhe to na gungunana aata hai na he gana , hum ne kabhi ye dawa nahi kiya k hum koi poet ya writter hain bas yahan seekhnay aatay hain.....

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

Jee Wasi ...yehan koi b perfect nahi ...
har kisi ko seekhnay ka amal jaari rakhna hai ..

aur jo samjhtay hein k wo sab jaantay hein
wo B kuch nahi jaantay ...!!
ELm ki na tu hadd hai aur naa hee koi ....inteha..!

Baqii darjaat zaroor hein ...!
aap ka intehaai khoobsoorat kalam ..kaam hum sabhi deykh chukay hein
so ..!! :thmbup: No Worries :insha:

Bahot sahi kaha aap ne Gul :thmbup: k ilam ki na to koi hadd hai aur ne he koi inteha
Bahot bahot shukriya Gul Aap k Lafzon ne hamesha hamein ek hosla aur himmat di hai :phool:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: IK Tabasum chahiye.....

buhat acha shairi hai wasi bhai

Bahot shukriya aap ka bhai :rose