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Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)
Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post:)
ab kia kaha jaye ..alfaaz ki kami lug rahi hai
ye sari poetry "mere dard ki kahani" ka dosra roop maloom hoti hai
dono hi sorton mein dard ny lafzon ko bhi gumgeen ker diya hai
buhat achi aur mukamal kavish hai apki
buhat gumgeen ehsaas sey bhari hui:)
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Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)
Originally posted by ahsaas View Post:)
ab kia kaha jaye ..alfaaz ki kami lug rahi hai
ye sari poetry "mere dard ki kahani" ka dosra roop maloom hoti hai
dono hi sorton mein dard ny lafzon ko bhi gumgeen ker diya hai
buhat achi aur mukamal kavish hai apki
buhat gumgeen ehsaas sey bhari hui:)
aap k khoobsurat comments ka mere paas thankss k ilawa koi jawab nahi hota hai
thankss once againsigpic
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