Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

[raafi]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

nice poetry ...................... iss khushi mein yeh phool aap ki nazar:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

nice poetry ...................... iss khushi mein yeh phool aap ki nazar:rose

Shukriya raafi
aap k liye 2 phoolrose

[GumShuda]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

MashAllah bohat khoob. :)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

pasand karnay ka bahot bahoot shukriya

[wajid hanif]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

:)

bahut khoob bro....:D:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

Shukriya Wajid

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

buhut khoob thi muskuraany ki koshish..

[shummu]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

wah wah Anjum jee bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne..:clap: khaaskar maqte pe to jitni daad doon kam hogi..bahut zyaada pasand aaya maqta....magar ek suggestion tha..agar aap apni is kalaam ko behr mein kehte to aur bhi mazaa dobaala ho jaata....koshish karein apni ghazal ko is behr mein kehne ki..

faa(fa)-i-laa-tun/ma-faa-i-lun/faa-lun(fa-i-lun)
2 1 2 2 , 1 2 1 2 , 2 2 (1 1 2)

usko dil se bhulaane kii koshish
kii bahut muskuraane kii koshish

shaa'i'rii ne miree kiyaa ruswaa
...

apna hii haath maiN jalaa baiThaa
jab ki khat ko jalaane kii koshish


ye to maine aapke shuru ke kuch sher ko koshish ki thi behr mein kehne ki..baaqi aap koshish karke dkehein..inshallah zaroor kaamyaabi milegi....:rose

[*Hala*]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

buht khubsurat poet sahib

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Muskranay ki koshish....:-)

oeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wa wa