do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

[shummu]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

buhat khoob
shummu jee ghazal ke liye daad qabool kijye
naya kalam kab share kar rahi heN??
khush rahiye
zmufti

shukriya zarqa sis... :rose dekhiye jab aamad ho....:embarasse

[shummu]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

Bohat hi khub kehi shumaila ji

is sher ki to kia hi baat hay

aisi ujlat meiN zindagii guzrii
'do ghaRi chain se basar na hui'

bahut bahut nawaazish..aap jaise sahib-e-ilm se daad paake dil khush ho jaata hai..aap meri ye ghazal bhi zaroor paRhiyega..mujhe yaqeen hai aapko zaroor pasand aayegi.. shukriya :)

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=4335

[raafi]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

aap nay jee bahut khoobsurat likha hai........................

[shummu]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

aap nay jee bahut khoobsurat likha hai........................

nawaazish raafi jee...:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

WAH JEE BAHOOT KHOOB

usko apnii har ik khushii de dii
zindagii phir bhi mukhtasar na hui

VERY NICE

[shummu]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

WAH JEE BAHOOT KHOOB

usko apnii har ik khushii de dii
zindagii phir bhi mukhtasar na hui

VERY NICE

bahut shukriya WASI jee:)

[*Hala*]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

haa ... buht khoob lekha hai thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: do ghaRi chain se basar na hui(Taaza tarahi ghazal)

haa ... buht khoob lekha hai thmbup:

Thanx a lot hala:)