saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

[sajjad4anjaly]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

hi dear buhat hi zabardast sharing
ki aapne aur its a nice feeling when anyone know someone like her creation

[vajiha]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

boghat hi khubsurat kalaam he aapka:masha ji
keep it up:clap:

[phototech81]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Khulta kisi py kion mery dil ka muamla
Shehro ky intekhab ny ruswa keya mujay

bohat hi kuch sir ji nice bohat hi peyari hai aap ki ghazal nice keep it up

[ahsaas]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Salaam aaj main apni woh ghazal share karungi jo maine shuru shuru mein likhi thi aur bade dil se likhi thi aur mujhe bahut azeez hai...ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi :rose

saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye
hijr meN vasl ke lamhaat bahut yaad aaye

bhoolna chaheiN to har baat bhuladeiN laikin
yaad aaye hai to har baat bahut yaad aaye

dil meN jaage the tujhe dekh ke jo pahlii baar
vo machalte huve jazbaat bahut yaad aaye

tum ko ab yaad rahii ho ki nahiiN, kyaa maaluum!
mujh ko to pahlii mulaaqaat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye

jin meN ham un se hameshaa ko judaa ho baiThe
phir 'shumaila' wahi halaat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila

attaching urdu version also...

zaberdast ...............aap ki takhleeq buhat umda hai .....dill mein uterny wali ...:rose

[gazal_uzma]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

wah
shumaila ji
tusi tu cha gaye ho
bohot hi khobsorat ghazal bohot pasand aaie
thanks 4 sharing
regards
uzma

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

hi dear buhat hi zabardast sharing
ki aapne aur its a nice feeling when anyone know someone like her creation

thank u so much..ek do roz pehle hi india se wapis aayi to aap sab ke replies dekhe to reply karna laazmi thehra so shukriya adaa karne aa gayi..shukriya :) :rose

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

boghat hi khubsurat kalaam he aapka:masha ji
keep it up:clap:

tah-e-dil s shukriya wareesa jee :rose

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Khulta kisi py kion mery dil ka muamla
Shehro ky intekhab ny ruswa keya mujay

bohat hi kuch sir ji nice bohat hi peyari hai aap ki ghazal nice keep it up

shukriya bahut bahut magar main sir jee nahi madam jee hoon:wk

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

zaberdast ...............aap ki takhleeq buhat umda hai .....dill mein uterny wali ...:rose

dili shukriya...mere aur bhi kalaam yahan maujood hain..un pe bhi zaroor nazar-e-karam farmaaiyega :)

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

wah
shumaila ji
tusi tu cha gaye ho
bohot hi khobsorat ghazal bohot pasand aaie
thanks 4 sharing
regards
uzma

thanx dear uzma....:) ek arse baad aap se humkalaam hote hue behad khushi ho rahi hai...aap ne meri is puraani ghazal ko bhi pasand farmaaya jaankar khushi hui...inshaAllah baat cheet hoti rahegi mukhtalif forums par...take care...:rose

[sohailmalik64]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Salaam aaj main apni woh ghazal share karungi jo maine shuru shuru mein likhi thi aur bade dil se likhi thi aur mujhe bahut azeez hai...ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi :rose

saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye
hijr meN vasl ke lamhaat bahut yaad aaye

bhoolna chaheiN to har baat bhuladeiN laikin
yaad aaye hai to har baat bahut yaad aaye

dil meN jaage the tujhe dekh ke jo pahlii baar
vo machalte huve jazbaat bahut yaad aaye

tum ko ab yaad rahii ho ki nahiiN, kyaa maaluum!
mujh ko to pahlii mulaaqaat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye

jin meN ham un se hameshaa ko judaa ho baiThe
phir 'shumaila' wahi halaat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila

attaching urdu version also...

Shumaila Sahiba mashaAllah bohat achi ghazal kehi hay aap nain jazbaat ki bohat dilkash andaaz main terjumani ki hay.

3 misroN maiN kuch wazan ka ferq mehsus ho reha hay agar bura nah manaiN to zera dekh lijiay ga

4th sher ka dusra misra

5th sher ka pehla misra

aakhri sher ka dusra misra

regards
Sohail Malik

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Adaab sohail jee aap ka behad shukriya jo aapne mere kalaam ko na sirf sahara balki uspe tanqeedi nazar bhi daali..asl mein ye kalaam bahut hi puraana hai..us waqt bhi wazn seekh hi rahi thi aur naam ko bhi sahi wazn pe istimaal nahi karti thi...magar baaqi misron mein kya GaRbaRi hai aur kahan hai zara nishaandehi farmaa dein to inaayat hogi..kyonki mujhe to misre theek lage..shukriya! :)

[sohailmalik64]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila Sahiba

Apnay ashaar ko aap behter samajhti haiN aur maiN bhi koi fun ka ustad nahiN keh dawa keruN.


aap kay zer e behs misray apni nacheez termeem kay saath likh diay haiN maqsad sirf un jaghon ki nishandehi kerna hay jahaN mujhay misroN maiN rukawat dikhai di ab aap is ko apni nazer say dekhaiN aur agar aap ko bhi aisa mehsus ho to apni fikr kay mutabiq termeem ker lijiay.



tum ko ab yaad rahii ho ki nahiiN, kyaa maaluum!
mujhay pahlii woh mulaaqaat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni kanoN ne
mujhay meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye


khair andesh

Sohail Malik

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

gr8..

maza aya perh k..
nice

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

thank u thank u :)