saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

[shummu]

Salaam aaj main apni woh ghazal share karungi jo maine shuru shuru mein likhi thi aur bade dil se likhi thi aur mujhe bahut azeez hai...ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi :rose

saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye
hijr meN vasl ke lamhaat bahut yaad aaye

bhoolna chaheiN to har baat bhuladeiN laikin
yaad aaye hai to har baat bahut yaad aaye

dil meN jaage the tujhe dekh ke jo pahlii baar
vo machalte huve jazbaat bahut yaad aaye

tum ko ab yaad rahii ho ki nahiiN, kyaa maaluum!
mujh ko to pahlii mulaaqaat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye

jin meN ham un se hameshaa ko judaa ho baiThe
phir 'shumaila' wahi halaat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila

attaching urdu version also...

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Ary wow kia baat hay G aap kee b really nice and great main ny shaid aap kee 1st hee pari hay really intersting...

bhoolna chaheiN to har baat bhuladeiN laikin
yaad aaye hai to har baat bahut yaad aaye

[D@y W@lk3r]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

hamesha ki terha zaberdast sharing. aur yaqinan yah bhi app nay khud hi likhi hain...

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Ary wow kia baat hay G aap kee b really nice and great main ny shaid aap kee 1st hee pari hay really intersting...

bhoolna chaheiN to har baat bhuladeiN laikin
yaad aaye hai to har baat bahut yaad aaye

Bahut bahut nawaazish LK jee...nahi jee isse pehle bhi aapne meri ek ghazal jo maine apni aawaaz mein bheji thi uspe bhi comments diye the..yaad aaya :)

Thanx a bunch :rose

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

hamesha ki terha zaberdast sharing. aur yaqinan yah bhi app nay khud hi likhi hain...

Thanx a lot DW..jee bilkul...humne hi likhi hai..........shukriya pasand farmaane ka :salam:

[Yaaram]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye
Yeh sher bohat pasand aaya aur poori ghazal bohat umdah likhi hay :)

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye
Yeh sher bohat pasand aaya aur poori ghazal bohat umdah likhi hay :)

ye hi to woh sher hai jo is ghazal ki jaan hai aur aur central idea hai ....isi pe poori ghazal based hai..yaaram jee mujhe khushi hui aap ko is sher ke saath poori ghazal bhi pasand aaya..hausla afzaayi farmaane ka bahut bahut shukriya :rose

shumaila

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Assalaam o alekum,

shummu rani tumhaari yeh ghazal ek baar phir perhnien ko mili waqaee bahoot hi gehri baatien chupi huee hain is ghazal bahoot khooob likhaa hai tumnien mujhe yeh ashaar behud pasand aaye

jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye

jin meN ham un se hameshaa ko judaa ho baiThe
phir 'shumaila' wahi halaat bahut yaad aaye

dili daaad qabool karo aur khoob achchi achchi aur pyaari pyaari ghazlien humse share kerti raho :thmbup: :rose :rose

[baykamal]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Assalaam o alaikum
aaj kal makhan(maska) bohat sasta hua wa hay. hamm nay to kaha k aap best poestess ho pegham ki to baat khatam. laikin aap yahaaN baasi ghazals post karti ho. pegham ko pehla number q nahi daiti haiN aap. hamaiN yahaaN 1st yaani sabb say pehlay posted shayeri chahiyai hai aap ki. yai na ho k kaheen daikha daikha sa maloom ho. samjheeN aap
itni samajhdaar to haiN aap.
ALLAH hafiz

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Assalaam o alekum,


shummu rani tumhaari yeh ghazal ek baar phir perhnien ko mili waqaee bahoot hi gehri baatien chupi huee hain is ghazal bahoot khooob likhaa hai tumnien mujhe yeh ashaar behud pasand aaye


jab bhi shahnaayi ki awaaz suni maiN ne
apne meNhdii se rache haath bahut yaad aaye


jin meN ham un se hameshaa ko judaa ho baiThe
phir 'shumaila' wahi halaat bahut yaad aaye


dili daaad qabool karo aur khoob achchi achchi aur pyaari pyaari ghazlien humse share kerti raho :thmbup: :rose :rose

W'salaam!


Shukriya Khurram jee..yaqenan aapne ye ghazal paRhi hui hogi kyonki bahut puraani hai...shukriya ek dafaa phir dil khol ke meri hausla afzaayi farmaane ka :rose

EID MUBARAK :)

Shumaila

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Assalaam o alaikum
aaj kal makhan(maska) bohat sasta hua wa hay. hamm nay to kaha k aap best poestess ho pegham ki to baat khatam. laikin aap yahaaN baasi ghazals post karti ho. pegham ko pehla number q nahi daiti haiN aap. hamaiN yahaaN 1st yaani sabb say pehlay posted shayeri chahiyai hai aap ki. yai na ho k kaheen daikha daikha sa maloom ho. samjheeN aap
itni samajhdaar to haiN aap.
ALLAH hafiz

Ws BK ke bacche maarungi han :hathora


lolz PG mere liye nayi jagah hai aur yahan hai taqreeban sabhi members naye hain mere liye to yaqeenan unke liye meri puraani ghazlein bhi nayi hui na :D aur nayi gahzlein to post ki hi thi..tumne sab paRh li kya.... :fuming: jis beech nayi aamad nahi hoti to un dinon main apna koi puraana kalaam post kar deti hono kyonki yahan ke liye woh nayi hi hai..samjhe ya aur samjhaaon :a stick:

[Masood]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila aik baar phir sey aap ko daad diyey bghair nahin rah saktey :) bohat sadah aur sehal alfaaz mein bohat khoobsurat shairi ki hai aur yehi baat is ka saboot hai keh shairi karney key liye koi mushkil alfaaz istimaal karna zaroori nahin. Baat to dil ki hoti hai keh dil sey kya alfaaz kahey jatey hain. Aur masha'Allah alfaaz ka saheeh istimaal karti hain aap :) Bohat khush rahein aur isi tarha apney achhey achhey kalaam sey hamein nawazti rahein :)

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Shumaila aik baar phir sey aap ko daad diyey bghair nahin rah saktey :) bohat sadah aur sehal alfaaz mein bohat khoobsurat shairi ki hai aur yehi baat is ka saboot hai keh shairi karney key liye koi mushkil alfaaz istimaal karna zaroori nahin. Baat to dil ki hoti hai keh dil sey kya alfaaz kahey jatey hain. Aur masha'Allah alfaaz ka saheeh istimaal karti hain aap :) Bohat khush rahein aur isi tarha apney achhey achhey kalaam sey hamein nawazti rahein :)

bahut bahut shukriya Masood jee.aap mere har kalaam pe dil khol ke hausla kun reply dete hain..mujhe bahut bahut khushi hoti hai..jab tak aap jaise paRhne waale maujood rahenge ..hum bhi kuch na kuch likhte rahenge..shukriya :rose

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

bohut khoobsorat:rose

[shummu]

Re: saath beete hue din raat bahut yaad aaye

Shukriya Sagar jee :)