Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

mari taraf sa ya laan omeed ha app ko maza nahi ayya ga



ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

10 sal too guzar deya app ka intazar ma ya 11va sal be guzar dejeya:)


ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

abi sham ho gai ghar too jana de jeya:khi:

ye kya hai?? :donno:

[shakeeel]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

last date kaya hai?

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

WAITING FOR MORE ENTRIES....AND SERIOUS ENTRIES

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

last date kaya hai?

Last date for ur entries: 15th August

[shakeeel]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

aww behr se khaarij ho gaya aapka misra :(

Jitna Tarpoo'n Gaa Utni Hee Saza DeGaa
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"

Ab Behr Mein Hai Yaa Nahi'n

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

:Umdaa:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

wah bahut khoob... bas ek choti si baat...

sitam to ye hai KE tujhse bichaR ke zindaa hun

bas 'KE' laga dijiye to misra behr mein aa jaayega :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Jitna Tarpoo'n Gaa Utni Hee Saza DeGaa
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"


Ab Behr Mein Hai Yaa Nahi'n

nahi abhi bhi nahi..ye dekhein behr ka wazan hai..


1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 2 1 2 , 2 2(1 1 2)

aur aapka misre ka wazan kuch yun aa raha hai:

Jit-2
na-1
tar-2
pun-2
ga-1
ut-2
ni-1
hi-1
sa-1
zaa-2
de-2
ga-2

jo ke diye gaye wazan se alag hai...

[shakeeel]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Likha to yahi tha bas composing mein mistake ho gai.

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3






jo keh dia hai jafakaar tu ne mujhko so
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

نگہِ یار میں اُلفت نہیں تغافل ہے

اب اِس کےبعدمیرا اِمتحان کیالےگا

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Likha to yahi tha bas composing mein mistake ho gai.

theek..bahut umda :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

jo keh dia hai jafakaar tu ne mujhko so
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

wah..!acchi girah hai....agar aap pehle misre ke aakhir mein SO hatake TO kar dein to kaisa rahega?:)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

نگہِ یار میں اُلفت نہیں تغافل ہے

اب اِس کےبعدمیرا اِمتحان کیالےگا

khoob...! mashallah aap to bilkul behr mein likhne lage hain...aapne teeno muqaable mein behr mein misre pesh kiye dekh kar bahut accha laga ..well done :rose