Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Chhoti See Try Kee Hai...
Shummu Jee Bataei'n Behr Mein Hai Ya Nahi'n

~Tu Meri Hansti Hui Hasti Ko Fana De Kar...
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"

[MUTFANIN]

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Walaikom Assalm

aik shair perha tha Daag ka.....

hamaray samnay hans hans kay ghair say batain
yehi tu daagh kalaijay ko khaye jatay hain

bus aisay mairay zehen mein aik line aai....main nay Shairi sekhiye thread bhi nahin perha hai .....aur na hi is 1.2.2.1 ki samajh aarahi hai.... means mujhay is kay saath alfaaz set karna nahin aarahay.....

lakin zehen mein jo line aai hai woh likh rahi hoon...

laga kay aag seenay mein woh chala ghair kay saath
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

:hehe:
jis qisam ki entries aarahi hain...mairay khayal say yeh chal jai gi....



ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

wah Rida,Meri entry pe hamla:yy:
waise ap ke misre ko dieting ki zaroorat he,wazan kuch zeyadae he 372-scare
Magar khayal accha he.
Daag beecharon ka imthehan tu kabhi khatam nahi howa.Zalim mehboob ne suplly pe supply de372-haha
TAREEF E GHAIR SUN KE JO MEIN NE DEYA JAWAB
IS BAAT PAR KHAFFA HEIN KEIN HUM SE ZABAN KI

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Misre par Misra 372-shock

jee girah means KNOT ..jaise hum 2 sire ko joRne ke liye KNOT(girah) lagate hain waise hi misre pe misra lagata hain magar usi behr mein jis mein misra hai aur rabt qaayam karte hain dono misron mein taakeh ek sher ban jaaye :)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Adab,Meri Mizahia koshish


yahi buhut he ke tu aj meri biwi he
``ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa ``

ha ha ha 372-haha bahut khoob..aur bahut sahi :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Walaikom Assalm



laga kay aag seenay mein woh chala ghair kay saath
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

achchi koshish hai magar afsos behr mein nahi hai .. :embarasse

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Chhoti See Try Kee Hai...
Shummu Jee Bataei'n Behr Mein Hai Ya Nahi'n

~Tu Meri Hansti Hui Hasti Ko Fana De Kar...
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"

yes ..!!!!

lekin mujhe aap se isse behtar girah ki tawaqqo hai huzoor :):thmbup:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

yes ..!!!!

lekin mujhe aap se isse behtar girah ki tawaqqo hai huzoor :):thmbup:

Ok.......:)

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

2nd entry

[*Rida*]

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achchi koshish hai magar afsos behr mein nahi hai .. :embarasse

yeh tu main nay bata hi diyaa...mujhay nahin malom kaisay karon...372-scare

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

2nd entry

372-haha................ :Shandar:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Jitna Tarpoo'n Ga Woh Utni Hee Saza Degaa
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"

[shahid_naman]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke teesre muqaable ke saath haazir hun...

misra:

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa (waseem barelvi)

behr:

ma-faa-i-lun,fa-i-laa-tun,ma-faa-i-lun,fe-lun(fa-i-lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 2 1 2 , 2 2(1 1 2)

mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaaN nahiiN miltaa
kabhii zamiiN tou kabhii aasmaaN nahiiN miltaa

Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 15th August

mari taraf sa ya laan omeed ha app ko maza nahi ayya ga



ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

10 sal too guzar deya app ka intazar ma ya 11va sal be guzar dejeya:)


ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

abi sham ho gai ghar too jana de jeya:khi:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

2nd entry

lolz bahut khoob 372-haha

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

ye sab funny ashaar kyon bhej rahe hain

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Jitna Tarpoo'n Ga Woh Utni Hee Saza Degaa
"Ab Iske Baad Meraa Imtihaan Kyaa Legaa"

aww behr se khaarij ho gaya aapka misra :(