Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaj 'naye sho'ara' mein ek naye haftawar silsile ka aaGhaz kar rahi hun..Aaiye Girah lagaiye...jaise naam se hi zaahir hai ...main hafte mein ek misra dungi... aap ko apne deemaagh se us pe giraah lagani hai...aap chahein to misre ko pehla misra ki tarah istimal karein ya doosra..ye aapki marzi hai...magar koshish karein misra behr/wazan/rhythm mein ho....aur dono misron mein rabt ho... uske baad hafte ke end mein hum polling karenge... jiski girah sab se zyaada logon ko pasand aayegi...woh winner hoga us hafte ka...ek person kam se kam 2 entries de sakta hai...aur yaad rakhein poori ghazal nahi likhni hai bas ek sher jis mein ye misra ho...theek....shukriya....:salam:

last date: 14 july.....

MISRA:

'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-vafaa karo unse'(faraz)

BEHR:

ma faa i lun, fa i laa tun, ma faa i lun ,fa i lun (fe' lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2 ,1 2 1 2 ,1 1 2 (2 2)

Aap sab ke participation ka intizaar rahega.... aaiye is mein hissa lein aur is silsile ko kaamyaab banaayein..shukriya....:rose

[Gul]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

Walekum assalam ..!
Buhat khoobsoorat silsila hai ....!

Acha laga ..:)

[Gul]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

رہِ جنوں میں اُمید وفا کرو اُن سے
کہا تھا کس نے کہ عہدِ وفا کرو اُن سے

plz baateiyya ga k sahi hai ?

[life.]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

nice topic

[zmufti]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

shummu jii
buhat achcha silsila hai
peghaam ke nauamooz shoaraa se darkhawst hai vo girah zaroor lagayeN
pehlay pehal sab se ghalati hoti hai
aur ham apni ghalatioN se hi seekhte heN
regards
zmufti

[*Duaa*]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

boht zabardast silsilay ka aaghaaz hay.
koshish k baawajood hum mien poetry k jaraseem nazar nahi aatay....kya kiya jaay.
phir bhi koshish jaari rakhien gay.

khush rahiay.
Duaa

[*Duaa*]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

ma faa i lun, fa i laa tun, ma faa i lun ,fa i lun (fe' lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2 ,1 2 1 2 ,1 1 2 (2 2)

is sab ka matlab bhi to batla dien na.....:)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

Bahot achha silsila shuroo kiya hai aap ne shummu

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

رہِ جنوں میں اُمید وفا کرو اُن سے
کہا تھا کس نے کہ عہدِ وفا کرو اُن سے

plz baateiyya ga k sahi hai ?

wah wah sis kya aaGhaz hai.... aap ne shuruwaat ki..dekh kar bahut bahut khushi hui......:thmbup: bahut umda girah hai... koshish kiya kijiye jo sher diya gaya hai use quotes ' ' mein rakha karein.....

aur silsile ko pasand farmaane ka behad shukriya :phool:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

Walekum assalam ..!
Buhat khoobsoorat silsila hai ....!

Acha laga ..:)

Thanx gul :rose

nice topic

thank u life :D:

shummu jii
buhat achcha silsila hai
peghaam ke nauamooz shoaraa se darkhawst hai vo girah zaroor lagayeN
pehlay pehal sab se ghalati hoti hai
aur ham apni ghalatioN se hi seekhte heN
regards
zmufti

bahut shukriya zarqa sis is silsile ko pasand farmaane ka..aap bhi hissa lijiyega taakeh sab aap se bhi seekh sakein ke kaise ek achchi girah lagayi jaati hai....uske ilawa jab koi sher pesh kare to aap bhi islaah kar dijiyega agar kami beshi ho to....shukriya :rose

boht zabardast silsilay ka aaghaaz hay.
koshish k baawajood hum mien poetry k jaraseem nazar nahi aatay....kya kiya jaay.
phir bhi koshish jaari rakhien gay.

khush rahiay.
Duaa

bahut shukriya duaa ...han koshish karien..shuruwat maine bhi tukbandi se hi ki thi .....kya pata kal ko aap ek achchi shayera ban jaayein :)

Bahot achha silsila shuroo kiya hai aap ne shummu

shukriya wasi jee...aap ke participation ka intizaar rahega :)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

ma faa i lun, fa i laa tun, ma faa i lun ,fa i lun (fe' lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2 ,1 2 1 2 ,1 1 2 (2 2)

is sab ka matlab bhi to batla dien na.....:)

heheh raaz ki baat hai nahi bataongi

kidding... :khi:

asl mein jab se ye thread lagayi hai..sab yahi pooch rahe hain aakhir ye bala hai kya lolz

isi section mein zmufti jee ne jo threads lagayi hai SHAYRI SEEKHIYE ke naam se...use parhiyega to kaafi madad milegi aur shayri ke rules..wazan..beher sab se waqfiyat hogi.... waise main yahan bhi koshish karungi explain karne ki...aap tukbandi to kijiye pehle :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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mene shair likha to hai i think k kuch kami hai
aap batain k kahan mene galti ki hai?

نبھا وہی وعدے نہ جفا کرو ان سے
کہا تھا کس نے کہ عہد وفا کرو ان سے

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaj 'naye sho'ara' mein ek naye haftawar silsile ka aaGhaz kar rahi hun..Aaiye Girah lagaiye...jaise naam se hi zaahir hai ...main hafte mein ek misra dungi... aap ko apne deemaagh se us pe giraah lagani hai...aap chahein to misre ko pehla misra ki tarah istimal karein ya doosra..ye aapki marzi hai...magar koshish karein misra behr/wazan/rhythm mein ho....aur dono misron mein rabt ho... uske baad hafte ke end mein hum polling karenge... jiski girah sab se zyaada logon ko pasand aayegi...woh winner hoga us hafte ka...ek person kam se kam 2 entries de sakta hai...aur yaad rakhein poori ghazal nahi likhni hai bas ek sher jis mein ye misra ho...theek....shukriya....:salam:

last date: 14 july.....

MISRA:

'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-vafaa karo unse'(faraz)

BEHR:

ma faa i lun, fa i laa tun, ma faa i lun ,fa i lun (fe' lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2 ,1 2 1 2 ,1 1 2 (2 2)

Aap sab ke participation ka intizaar rahega.... aaiye is mein hissa lein aur is silsile ko kaamyaab banaayein..shukriya....:rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

mene shair likha to hai i think k kuch kami hai
aap batain k kahan mene galti ki hai?

نبھا وہی وعدے نہ جفا کرو ان سے

کہا تھا کس نے کہ عہد وفا کرو ان سے

misra kuch samajh nahi aaya..can u write in roman also...:rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-naya HAFTAWAR SILSILA

attachment nazar nahi aaa raha/...kya aap phir se upload kar denge....shukriya