Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

[shummu]

Salam humne bhi mehfil-e-sukhan mein diye gaye tarahi misre pe kuch likhne ki jasarat ki hai..ghazal saada si hai....ummeed hai kisi laayaq lagegi.. aap sab ki aara ki muntazir

meri bikhri hui hastii ko ikhathTaa karne
koi aa jaaye kahiN se mujhe poora karne!

'raat aayee hai mire Gham meiN izaafaa karne'
mujhko tanhaaiyoN meiN aur bhi tanhaa karne

bewafaayi ka tum aaye ho khulaasah karne?
ya ke aaye ho faqat koi tamashaa karne?!

phir chale uski wafaaoN pe bharosaa karne
Ghalatii jo kabhi kii thii wo dubaaraa karne

pehle to dil ko mire choRha tha zakhmi karke
aur ab aaya hai woh kaar-e-maseehaa karne!

abhi to khol ke rakh dete ho apne dil ko
hum na honge to kahaaN jaaoge aisaa karne?

tumse bujhtii hui ummeed ki lau kehti hai
kam se kam ab to chale aao ujaalaa karne!

shukriya,
shumaila

[*Rida*]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht achii ghazal likhi hai :em:
buht pasand aai....:clap:
likhrti rehiye aur share karti rehiye:phool:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

very nice,bohot achcheh khayalaat hain,keep sharing

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht achii ghazal likhi hai :em:
buht pasand aai....:clap:
likhrti rehiye aur share karti rehiye:phool:

thank u so much rida ise parhne aur saraahne ke liye....:rose :rose

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

very nice,bohot achcheh khayalaat hain,keep sharing

bahut shukriya sensible jee:) :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

veeeeeery niceeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Z.]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

walaikum salam Shummu,

as usual bohot payari sharing

btw i have visited your audio site, and i just love it :D

khush Rahein :rose

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

veeeeeery niceeeeeeeeeeeeee

thannnnnnnnnnnk yoooooouuuuuuuuuuuu:salam:

[zmufti]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

buhat khoob
Shummu jee
ghazal ke liye daad qabool kijye
khush rahiye
zmufti

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

walaikum salam Shummu,

as usual bohot payari sharing

btw i have visited your audio site, and i just love it :D

khush Rahein :rose

thanx a lot for the appreciation...accha audio files pasand aayi..I 'm glad..guestbook nahi sign ki??:)

thanx again :rose

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

buhat khoob
Shummu jee
ghazal ke liye daad qabool kijye
khush rahiye
zmufti

shukriya sis aap jaisi achi likhne waali ki janaib se daad paake bahut khushi hui... :rose

[Z.]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

thanx a lot for the appreciation...accha audio files pasand aayi..I 'm glad..guestbook nahi sign ki??:)

thanx again :rose

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

han inshallah use fix kar dungi..asl mein aajkal india aayi hui hoon..wapis jaate hi ye kaam kar dungi...thanx again:rose

[shehzadi]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

chhupi rustam hai aap bahut hi khoob likha hai khud ne!very nice

[shummu]

Re: Taaza Ghazal-meri bikhri hui hasti...

thanx dear..asl mein pehle shayri kiya karti thi..ab to kayi saal se shayri band hai..bas parh leti hun..:)