Nadamat

[Masood]

Nadamat

[Shaheen]

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Masood aesa bewafa ko samandar mai baha do ..
wah nice Masood bro .boht umdah poetry

[*Rida*]

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Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
Masood aisay bay wafa ko samandar mein ba do......
kar guzrain bhaya.....:em:

[zmufti]

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masood saheb
aakhri line buhat sakht hai
iss ka kuch mutbadal sochiye

[Masood]

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masood saheb
aakhri line buhat sakht hai
iss ka kuch mutbadal sochiye

Zaroor Zarqa magar sakht kis maano mein?

[aabi2cool]

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maslan ..
io k ... masood aysay baywafa ko tum bhi bhula do
ye phir
masood aysay baywafa ko tum se bhula do

[Muhammad Khalil]

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Ghalti moaaf kee jay...................................


jo ghalti tasleem kar lain wo to Azeem hu jata hay

[Mujahid Khan]

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aap ki saari ghazal kamal ki hai,bus zara akhri sher mey aap ney jaldbaazi kar key webside per feed kar dia hai,bahar haal agar aap bura naa maanen tho agar yeh sher aisa ho jaae tho kesa lageyga,

aapka sher,
tujh sey chheenleen hain jiss ne tamam ter khushian
masood aisey bewafa ko samandar mey baha dho

my suggestion,
masud sey chheenleen hain jiss ne tamam ter khushian
uss bewafa ko khush rehna bhi koi sikhha dho

suggestion key liye muaafi chahta hun,keep writing

[*Duaa*]

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well....boht achha likha hay aap nay:thmbup:

aur ik baat jis par taqreeban sab nay etraaz kiya hay...last line:mm:

"Masood aysay baywafa ko samander mien baha do":)

well alfaaz sakht zaroor hien magar mujhay achhay lagay......:lpop:

baat sirf sooch ki hay...aur yahan baat kissi ko personally bahaanay ki nhi hay...ussay zehn say utaarnay ki hay......

[shummu]

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wah masood jee wah...teesra sher dil mein utar gaya..daad pesh hai...

[sohailmalik64]

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Masood bhai

zerqa sahiba sahih keh rehi haiN derasal baray sakht mood maiN likhi gai yeh tehreer hay --- is ka aghaz hi karri saza say hay

jazboN maiN itni shiddet wehshat ki allamat hay

baharhaal kawish yuN achi hay keh jazboN ka juN ka tuN izhar ker dia hay

Regards
sohail malik

[Gul]

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Nadamat

Zabardast Masood Jee ...Kia baat hai ...Buhat khoob......


Ab aisi Koi Khushi Iss Dil ka Nagar ko Bukhsho
Jab Jal Othay Muqaddar tu Andhiyun!! Hawa DOU

[_Dard_Aashna_]

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bara jarihaana andaz -e- bayaan hai

wesai nice

[aquari]

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bauht khoobb
aisey be wafa ko samaunder main baha do...
jo bewafai kareyy ussey sirf waqt k samunder main choor doo ..yehi bauht barii saza hogii us k liyaa

[shahid_naman]

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Nadamat

:insha:
nice sharing:rose