Umeed

[Masood]

Phir wohi teen-age ka kalaam share karta hoon:

Umeed

samaan raas na aaya hai, taqdeer ko meri eid ka
dil mein ik phool khil utha hai ab umeed ka

juda taqdeer ney ham ko kar hi diya hai to kya huwa?
aaey ga inshaAllah ik din lamhaa teri deed ka

tum aao to mehfil-e-dil sajjey, shama-e-muhabbat afroz ho
mil baithein deewaney do, mazzah aaey guft-o-shuneed ka


bin tere hain pheekey sab rang qos-e-qazah key bhi
bin tere hai shab-e-yalda yeh ujala eid ka

dor-e-muhabbat mein har sitam mehboob ka pyara lagta hai
Khuda haami-o-naasir ho Masood tujh yazeed ka

[Yaaram]

Re: Umeed

wah Masood bhai bohat acha likha hai aapne thnx :rose 2nd and last shaer is gr8 yarrrrrrrrr wah

[La'hasil]

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Buhat khoob :rose


khush rahyeah :)

['SamRazi']

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dor-e-muhabbat mein har sitam mehboob ka pyara lagta hai


Buhut zabardast baat kahi aap ne :rose

[aik_lerki]

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juda taqdeer ney ham ko kar hi diya hai to kya huwa?
aaey ga inshaAllah ik din lamhaa teri deed ka


bohat he zabardast :rose

[Aania]

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bohat hi achi likhi hai........ keep writing .... "juda taqdeer ne ham ko ker hi dia...."

[Shaim]

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topic ki tarah buhat khoobsorat nazm hai:)

per shab-e-yaldaa kia hoota hai?:cc:

[Baad-e-Saba]

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very niiiice