Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

[Masood]

Ahmed Faraz ji merey pasandeedah shair hain. Unki aik ghazal ka misrah hai "bahar ki hai" yeh mujhey bohat achha laga to dil chaha keh khud kuchh kavish ki jaey is per. To aik ghazal likhi hai - pesh-e-khidmat hai:


Zakhm Huwey Hain Tazah

Zakhm huwey hain taazah key ibtida bahar ki hai
aey dil zabt karna! yeh saza bahar ki hai

aey naseem-e-sehar! jao jo unkey nagar, to yeh kehna
"karab ki aahoun mein dhali wafa bahar ki hai

hijjar ka badil hai chhaya, shaam-e-gham kathin
dil ney tujh ko pukara keh ibtida bahar ki hai"

kyunker poonchh sakein ge ham, aankhon mein aaey ashk
keh ashkon sey bheegi hui rida bahar ki hai

teri mehfil mein aa to jaein, per kaisey aaein ham
paoun mein hain silasil, to chaak qaba bahar ki hai

ham to thehrey sehraa-naward, kya kaam hamein shehar sey
khushi raho, sukhi baso, yeh sadaa bahar ki hai

Masood shayid hi ho ga koi Faraz sey na-aashna
"keh aap apna ta'aruf hawa bahar ki hai"

[La'hasil]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

Wah BUhat khoobsurat :rose


khush rahyeah :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

bohat khooB Maqsoode medan maar lya yar......First sher kamal ka hai zabardast :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

Zakhm Huwey Hain Tazah



kyunker poonchh sakein ge ham, aankhon mein aaey ashk
keh ashkon sey bheegi hui rida bahar ki hai


teri mehfil mein aa to jaein, per kaisey aaein ham
paoun mein hain silasil, to chaak qaba bahar ki hai

As usual :thmbup:

[Shaim]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

again beautifuul:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

kiyun'ker pounch sakein ge ham,aankhon mein aaey ashk
keh ashkon sey bheegi hui rida bahar ki hai

teri mehfil mein aa to jaein, per kaisey aaein ham
paoun mein hain silasil,to chaak qaba bahar ki hai

Ta ji umda kalaam.har shair har misra umda.:)

[Brijinder]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

Masood,
A good attempt.Have u ever tried Nazm?It will give u a chance to explore one line of thought much more clearly,at least initially.
All of u are going thru,it seem,a good creative mode where as I am having a strong writer's block these days.
Keep it up
Brijinder

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Zakhm Huwey Hain Taazah

zabardast