Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

[Masood]

Aik aur tooti phooti nazm liye hazir hoon, bardasht kar lijiye ga :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Bardasht kya hum ne to hazm bhi kar li hai..........Aas ke sare toote tare.....Tum bhi rahe na ab ke humare wah maqsoode wah...:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

TUM bhi rahay nah ab k humaray.........

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Acha likha hey masood, thanx for sharing.

[aik_lerki]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

zabardast
bohat achaa likha hai aap nay :rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Aik aur tooti phooti nazm liye hazir hoon, bardasht kar lijiye ga :)

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khub. masood sahib aap ke yeh udaas sa kalam bohat achaa lagaa.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

[La'hasil]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Buhat khoob Masood buhat acha likha hai :rose


khush rahyeah :)

[Brijinder]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Hi Masood,
Is it possible that u post ur poems in roman?
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Masood]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Ji Brijinder ji main inshaAllah inhein Roman mein bhi post karoon ga. Thora sa waqt dey dijiye :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahoooot khooob ji zabardast kavish likhi aur share ki masood sahib aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

ek song mujhe yaad yaa aapki kavish perh ker :)

wo huve naa humaare hum they jinke sahaare

doobi jab dil ki nayya saamnien they kinaare

[Masood]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Brijinder ji yeh aap key hukum per iss roman mein kiya hai:

Tum bhi rahey na ab key hamarey


udaas hai duniya, udaas hai jeevan
kaisi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagan
aankh mein aansu, lab peh aahein
badal gaein terey pyaar ki bahein
sajan aaja, pyaas bujha jaa
ujjar gaee hoon, aa key saja ja
dard-e-judaee bharta jaey
gham ka darya charhta jaey
tez hai aandhi, tapta sehraa
biphree hain maujein, gehra darya
teri judaee maar na daaley
aakey merey dard btaa ley
kaisey pohanchoon terey talak main
aakey dey ja aik jhalak main
deed ki aas mein jeeti rahi hoon
zehr tha lekin peeti rahi hoon
aas key sarey tootey sitarey
tum bhi rahey na ab key hamarey

[Z.]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Tum bhi rahey na ab key hamarey...

Shukriya hamarey sath share kerney ka

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

Buhat khoob janab... :)

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

wah bhai kia kahneyn,,,,,:rose
Tum bhee rahey naa ab key humarey
tum bhee rahey naa ab key humarey
tum bhee rahey naa ab key humarey
dil karta hey iss pey likhta hii challa jaoon:rose

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: Tum Bhi Rahey Na Ab Key Hamarey

bohat khooob masoood bhai