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'Imran' jahaan too ho,,,,
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Re: 'Imran' jahaan too ho,,,,
Wah Mani... bohat hi acha andaaz-e-bayan, ab aap ki shaaeri ROMANTIC hoti jaa rahi hay lagta hay mohabbat ki dhun kuch ziyada hi zeest main shaamil-e-haal hay :)
Apnay takhalus ka istimaal jo aap nay matlay main kia bohat unique aur acha laga kiyonki aksar maqtay main istimaal hota hay.... har ek shair kamaal ka aur kafiyon aur shairoon ka tasalsul lajawaab, paRh kar lutf aaya.... bilkhusoos yeh shaair kam-az-kam meray liye haasil-e-ghazal hay jo kuch na keh kar bhi bohat kuch keh gaya :)
Kuch Lafz Hadh-e-Fahem Say Uss Paar Hain Bastay
Har Lafz Ko Behroon Main Sajaana Nahin Hota......!
Issi tarhan apnay kalam say humain mustafeed kartay rahain, Khush Rahyeh :)sigpic
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Re: 'Imran' jahaan too ho,,,,
Originally posted by thefire1 View PostWah Mani... bohat hi acha andaaz-e-bayan, ab aap ki shaaeri ROMANTIC hoti jaa rahi hay lagta hay mohabbat ki dhun kuch ziyada hi zeest main shaamil-e-haal hay :)
Apnay takhalus ka istimaal jo aap nay matlay main kia bohat unique aur acha laga kiyonki aksar maqtay main istimaal hota hay.... har ek shair kamaal ka aur kafiyon aur shairoon ka tasalsul lajawaab, paRh kar lutf aaya.... bilkhusoos yeh shaair kam-az-kam meray liye haasil-e-ghazal hay jo kuch na keh kar bhi bohat kuch keh gaya :)
Kuch Lafz Hadh-e-Fahem Say Uss Paar Hain Bastay
Har Lafz Ko Behroon Main Sajaana Nahin Hota......!
Issi tarhan apnay kalam say humain mustafeed kartay rahain, Khush Rahyeh :)
Or rehi Mohaabat ki Dhun Tu Wo Tu Gum Ho gai kb ki ab tu Busssssssssssssssssss,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,:wk
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Re: 'Imran' jahaan too ho,,,,
Nahin janab yeh tou aap apnay dil ko behlaanay kay liye keh rahay hain... Mohabbat ek aisa rishta hay jis ki dhun zindagi main har ek lamhay bajti rehti hay aur kabhi khatam nahin hoti kiyonki jab mohabbat khatam hojaati hay tou wajood-e-insaani bhi ussi kay saath khatam hojaata hay....
Aap ki shaaeri paRh kar bhi yehi mehsoos hua hay kay yeh dhun baaqi hay aur baRi shiddat say baj rahi hay, aap ko shayed iss ka ilm na ho magar aap kay dil say jo aawaaz aap ki ungliyon ki madad say iss computer screen per bikhri hay woh tou kam-az-kam yehi pegham day rahi hay.....
Khush rahyeh aur yonhi achi shaeri jis main mohabbat ki dhun shamil hay say humain mustafeed kartay rahyeh :)sigpic
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