Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

[hayaa_n]

Nashaiman hay koi maira,na koi aashiya'n maira
May tanha hu'n zama'nay mai'n,nahi koi makaa'n maira
Na koi mairi manzil hai,na koi hamsafar maira
Mai'n tanha hu'n hamaisha say,hay dushman yeh jahaa'n maira
:rose
Gila hay mujh ko apno'n say,na ghairo'n say koi shikwa
Yeh'hi maira muqaddar tha,ye'hi tha imteha'n maira
:rose
Tumharay pyar nay mujh ko sahaara day'diya warna
Mai'n kho ja'ti zamaa'nay mai'n,na milta phir nisha'n maira
:rose
Chalain gayy saath mil'kar ham basa'ain gayy nai duniya
Tum'hi ab mairi manzil ho,tum'hi ho kaarwa'n maira
:rose

Wahi hoga taira masskan wahi ho'ga makaa'n maira
:rose

[najma]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Nashaiman hay koi maira,na koi aashiya'n maira
May tanha hu'n zama'nay mai'n,nahi koi makaa'n maira
Na koi mairi manzil hai,na koi hamsafar maira
Mai'n tanha hu'n hamaisha say,hay dushman yeh jahaa'n maira
:rose
Gila hay mujh ko apno'n say,na ghairo'n say koi shikwa
Yeh'hi maira muqaddar tha,ye'hi tha imteha'n maira
:rose
Tumharay pyar nay mujh ko sahaara day'diya warna
Mai'n kho ja'ti zamaa'nay mai'n,na milta phir nisha'n maira
:rose
Chalain gayy saath mil'kar ham basa'ain gayy nai duniya
Tum'hi ab mairi manzil ho,tum'hi ho kaarwa'n maira
:rose

Wahi hoga taira masskan wahi ho'ga makaa'n maira
:rose

haya sahiba!
itnii haseen, khoobsoorat, aur rawaaN ghazal ki takhleeq par meri janib se bhar-pur daad qubool kijiye
masha allaah bohat hi khoob kalaam hay.dil khush hua.aise kalaam to site par kam kam hi nazar ate haiN.
sada khush rahiye
:rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Assalaam o alekum,


Haya ji bahoot khoob bahoot hi umdeh kavish humse share ki aapnien najma baaji nien such hi kahaa hai ke aise kalaam bahoot kam hi miltey hain sites per shukriyaa humse share kernien kaa DiLi Daad Qabool karien khush rahien

[La'hasil]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

buhat khoobsurat buhat hi Umdaah likha hai :)


khush rahyeah :)

[Masood]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Nashaiman hay koi maira,na koi aashiya'n maira
May tanha hu'n zama'nay mai'n,nahi koi makaa'n maira
Na koi mairi manzil hai,na koi hamsafar maira
Mai'n tanha hu'n hamaisha say,hay dushman yeh jahaa'n maira
:rose
Gila hay mujh ko apno'n say,na ghairo'n say koi shikwa
Yeh'hi maira muqaddar tha,ye'hi tha imteha'n maira
:rose
Tumharay pyar nay mujh ko sahaara day'diya warna
Mai'n kho ja'ti zamaa'nay mai'n,na milta phir nisha'n maira
:rose
Chalain gayy saath mil'kar ham basa'ain gayy nai duniya
Tum'hi ab mairi manzil ho,tum'hi ho kaarwa'n maira
:rose

Wahi hoga taira masskan wahi ho'ga makaa'n maira
:rose

Hayaa itni khoobsurat aur shagufta ghazal ki sharing par bohat bohat shukriyah. Main ney aap ki ijazat key bghair aap ki ghazal ko Urdu mein likha hai, kyun keh merey nazdeek Urdu adab ka husn Urdu rasm-ul-khat mein hi hai. Aap ki nazar:

[aroosa]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

wao bohat khoobsoorat nazam likhi hain...:)

[handsome]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

bohat acchi sharing hay jee sada likhitay rahain :) :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Assalam.o.aleikum:)
Najma ji
Khurram Shaikh ji
Khawahish ji
Aroosa ji
Handsome ji
taji


Aap sab kay replies baar baar read kiye hai'n.Bouhat khushi bhi hui aur Allah ka bouhat shukar bhi adaa kiya kay maira likha aap logo'n ko acha laga aur mujhay masha Allah say itnay achay replies read karnay ko milay.Bouhat bouhat shukriya aap sab ka.Khush rahiye.:)

ta ji aap nay hamaisha ki tarha mujhay saraaha aur urdu mai'n likhi ghazal daikh kay bouhat khushi hui aur yeh aihsaas bhi k aap nay itna busy hotay huway bhi yeh kiya.ta ji bouhat shukriya.khush rahiye sadaa.Ameen:)

[Ambreen]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Arey haya bahut hi umda likha hai bahut sanjedgi aur pukhtagi ke sath bahut acha likha likhti rehna

[hayaa_n]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Ambreen ji:) kitna loving hay aap ka reply.ji Insha Allah likhti rahu'n gi.Bouhat shukriya is pazeeraai ka.:)

[samander]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

BARA ACHCHA LIKHTI HAIN AAAP KHOOB LIKHA HAI aJNABI

[hayaa_n]

Re: Nashaiman Hay Koi Maira

Bouhat Shukriya Samander ji...aap ka nice reply read kar k khushi hui aur dance daikh kar bhi.:)