Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[Masood]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

Gham nahi'n aik aasra hay abhi
Na ho duniya maira Khuda hay abhi

Dil mai'n ik dard sa utha hay abhi
Kiya koi haadsa huwa hay abhi

Kaisay daikhai'n nazar utha kay mujhay
Saamnay un'kay aaina hay abhi

main kuchh nahin kehta - alfaaz boltey hain tumharey :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

Ta Ji aap kay yeh replies mujhay khushi kay saath howsla bhi bakhshtay hai'n aur bas jo kuch mind mai'n aata hay aap jaisay manjhay huway aur itnay umda is forum kay poets ki mowjudgi mai'n us ko likhti chali jaati hu'n.bouhat shukriya ta ji kay aap sab mujh junior ki bhi tareef kartay hai'n aur howsla barhatay hai'n..khush rahiye.Aameen:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

Assalam.o.aleikum,,

Yaaram ji bouhat shukriya Urdu composing ka.Jazaak Allah:)

''Dil say hota huwa sir-e-miyygaa'n''(Palko'n kay kinaaray)

is misray ko roman urdu may sahi nahi likh paa rahi.Sorry

[samander]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

ACCHI GHAZAL HA9I KHOOBSURAT..........AJNABI:masha

[hayaa_n]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

Samandar ji khushi hui reply say k aap ko yeh bhi kaawish achchi lagi.khush rahiye.:)

[Hassan]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

jasy sahil py kuch hova hay abhii
HMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
HSN

[hayaa_n]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

jasy sahil py kuch hova hay abhii
HMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
HSN

Hassan ji reply ka bouhat shukriya.

[~Aashoo~]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

really nice:)
bohatt khoob
ALLAH aap ko khush rakhay ameen

[hayaa_n]

Re: Gham Nahi'n Aik Aasra Hay Abhi

really nice:)
bohatt khoob
ALLAH aap ko khush rakhay ameen

Aashoo ji :jazak: :) kitnay umda reply aur Dua say nawaza hay aap'nay.Bouhat shukriya.