yeh aur baat

[Gul]

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: yeh aur baat

waah kitni khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne
na jane kitni baar parh chuka hoon ji karta hai k parhta he hooN
bahot bahot umda very nice

[Gul]

Re: yeh aur baat

:) ....Mein nay b khud jab likhi tu nahi parhi thee yeh nazm ..
magar abhi parhi tu laga ...k dobaaraa b parhni chahiyay ..!

sirf half an hour mein kal raat likhi ...!
kabhi jab tanhaai Batein karay tu hee likh sakta hai na insan :)

Thanx wasi !

[ummid]

Re: yeh aur baat

I was feeling lil low today.. so me yahan aa gai... aap ki shairy humesha hi aik acchi feeling deti hai hume... thanx gul baai.. aap PG family ka hissa hai..

@ topic... bauaht hi khoob ashaar hai... behad anokhe... MashAllah...
khush rahein... :rose
wasalam..

[ummid]

Re: yeh aur baat

and the most important thing... ke is nazam mein "ummid" hai.... hope... hume woh nazmein or ashar acche nahi lagte jo bus mayoosi per base ho... is namaz mein chahe jaane ki khawahish ke saath, ummid bhi nazar aati hai... you are simply great huma baaji... khush rahein... :rose

[saraah]

Re: yeh aur baat

yeh aur baat k gehna gya hai wo rishta
yeh aur baat gumaan ki tarang baqi hai
wow sis.....out standing...
aur wasi ki baat se ittefaq kroon ge...me ne b kyi baar parrha hai issay
har baar ek nyi chashni k sath:)
gonna b my fav.....:rose

[J.KHAN]

Re: yeh aur baat

kya 30 maint main likhi hai:mm:...

Gul ji hum to sari zindagi Asi nahi likh sakte.........

jii Bahoot bahoot khubsoorat likhi hai aap ne

[*Hala*]

Re: yeh aur baat

buht hai khubsurat lekha hia .. lekhti rahi khush rahein

[Gul]

Re: yeh aur baat

I was feeling lil low today.. so me yahan aa gai... aap ki shairy humesha hi aik acchi feeling deti hai hume... thanx gul baai.. aap PG family ka hissa hai..

@ topic... bauaht hi khoob ashaar hai... behad anokhe... MashAllah...
khush rahein... :rose
wasalam..

and the most important thing... ke is nazam mein "ummid" hai.... hope... hume woh nazmein or ashar acche nahi lagte jo bus mayoosi per base ho... is namaz mein chahe jaane ki khawahish ke saath, ummid bhi nazar aati hai... you are simply great huma baaji... khush rahein... :rose

Buhat Khush rahein Ummid !!
Har Mushkil mein khoaf hai
Khoaf mein kabhi kabhi mayoosi b hoti hai
magar Har Positive Khoaf k sath aik HOPE hai ..

and yehi mera peghaam hai ! inshaAllah
Khush rahein dear!teddy

[Soulmate]

Re: yeh aur baat

wow great feelings

[Gul]

Re: yeh aur baat

yeh aur baat k gehna gya hai wo rishta
yeh aur baat gumaan ki tarang baqi hai
wow sis.....out standing...
aur wasi ki baat se ittefaq kroon ge...me ne b kyi baar parrha hai issay
har baar ek nyi chashni k sath:)
gonna b my fav.....:rose

Thanx dear Saarah
Aap k alfaz meray liya Buhat Value rakhtay hein
Khush rahiyay!teddy

kya 30 maint main likhi hai:mm:...

Gul ji hum to sari zindagi Asi nahi likh sakte.........

jii Bahoot bahoot khubsoorat likhi hai aap ne

Mujhay b likhnay mein kafi maah lag gay ..!:)

yeh poem bey-shak 30 minutes hee mein likhi ...
magar kafi dinoN baad
Sab likh saktay hein ..yeh mera dawaa hai ..
Agar Koshish karay aap b kijay ..aur Qalam ka haqq nibahhiyay !:thmbup:

buht hai khubsurat lekha hia .. lekhti rahi khush rahein

Buhat shukriya Hala dearo teddy
Jee Koshish hai k Ta dum hasti .....Likhti rahooN :insha::)

[Gul]

Re: yeh aur baat

wow great feelings

Thanx ! ! Adnan Brother!

[*Rida*]

Re: yeh aur baat

wow...beautiful ....:clap:...buht piyara likha hai sis.....

[saraah]

Re: yeh aur baat

Thanx dear Saarah
Aap k alfaz meray liya Buhat Value rakhtay hein
Khush rahiyay!teddy





:)

n its an honour 4 me dear sis........:salam:

[Gul]

Re: yeh aur baat

wow...beautiful ....:clap:...buht piyara likha hai sis.....

Thanx Rida dear buhat khush rahiay !