Saughaat

[Brijinder]

Saughaat

Jis tamnna ko jiya tha tanhaioN main kai baar
Us ahsaas ki tabeer mili aaj mujhay gha_ir ban kar

Woh dulhan to bani baithee thi sakhioN main
Woh baraat magar ghar say meray na aayee thi
Udhar who ho rahi thi kisi ki umr bhar kay liyay
YahaaN yukhbasta waqt tha aur meri tanhaai thi

Dost na ajnabi bus ab khalaa main latka sa ik rishta hai
Pehchaan kar bhi na pehchaanti hui aankhaiN mera muqaddar hai

Jin khwaaboN pay pali hai meray takhyyul ki umr
Nazar karta hoon who sub meri dost tujhay
Banaa kay mahbbat ki main aakhri saughat



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Hindu da_ir jaayay,ka'aba jagah-i-musalmaaN hai
MaiN to faqt insaaN hooN,meri jagah kahaN hai?

[La'hasil]

Re: Saughaat

hmmm Khoob :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Saughaat

Shukriya,meharbaani
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Masood]

Re: Saughaat

Brijinder bohat achha aur khoobsurat likha hai, daad qabool kijiye.

['SamRazi']

Re: Saughaat

Jin khwaaboN pay pali hai meray takhyyul ki umr
Nazar karta hoon who sub meri dost tujhay
Banaa kay mahbbat ki main aakhri saughat



Buhut achey Birijinder jee :thmbup:

[Brijinder]

Re: Saughaat

Saima,Masood
Thanx for your warm words of appreciation.This is initself a reward of a poem if it stays with the reader for some time.And if it becomes a part of reader's growth n crytalises their covictions,then it is its highest reward.
Thanx once again
brijinder"sagar"

[sadaf]

Re: Saughaat

vahhhhh....
wohi gahraai....wohi izhaar ki aazaadi....
bohat achhe saaheb...
bohat khoob

[Brijinder]

Re: Saughaat

Muafi chauNga ki itnay khuloos say likha aapnay aur mujhsay nazaraNdaaz ho gaya.

Bahut bahut shukriya,meharbaani.
Brijinder"Sagar"