~ Hal - e- Dil ~

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

bohot khoob
nazam kehna bhi aik art hota hay. aap ki main nay abhi pehli hi nazam parrhi hay or pehli hi cheez aap ki bohot pasand aaie.
regards
uzma khan

Bohat shukeriya Uzama ji :eye:

[Hamsafar]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

bohat hi piyre
shairing

bohat acha idea liya hia

asli poet ki kahsiat hi yehi hoti hai

k har cheeeeez par nazar rakhe :rose well done

[ssn]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

acha likha hay

lekin may nay pehlay bhi is tarah ki nazm parhi hui hay
yeh kisi nazm ki copy hay ho sakta hay ap nay na parhi ho,
bar haal ap nay achi nazm likhi hay

[sajjad4anjaly]

4 lovers

:) :masha hi komal how r u ?really buhat mazaa aaya aapki nazam parrh kar lakin kya main poch sakta hon k aapne yeh nazam kin feelings main likhy hai ......baqi buhat khooob:)

[jia]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

snwrny ko to pathr bhi snwer sakty hain
shrt yeh hay k sunwaarny ka tariqa hoo

main abhi naye naye aye hoon isliya just 4 try
i m doing this

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Bohat khob............

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

bohat khub :rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

:rose

hoon very nice ge :rose

[luv alishba]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

bht bht acha,,really nice zabrdast yar keep it up!

[life.]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

v nice poem Komal sis

[nirma1230]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

nice very heart touching, thanks to share with us, appreciated

[sufyan_shaikh]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

its owsam yar

[kingkhalid]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Wahhhh kia baat hai Nice.......

[fayyazkhan]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

:rose

zabardast nihayat umda nazm hai

[fayyazkhan]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

snwrny ko to pathr bhi snwer sakty hain
shrt yeh hay k sunwaarny ka tariqa hoo

main abhi naye naye aye hoon isliya just 4 try
i m doing this

koshish jaari rakhain yahan boht se dost aap ki hoslaafzai kartay rahain ge