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  • #2
    Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

    Veri nice komal bohat achhi nazm likhi hai aap ney :)
    tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujhey
    tumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey

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    • #3
      Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

      Originally posted by Masood
      Veri nice komal bohat achhi nazm likhi hai aap ney :)
      Thankx 4 appriciation .. :)

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      • #4
        Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

        v nice poem Komal sis :) :thmbup:

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        • #5
          Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

          Bohut khoob:rose
          Qaffas-e-hijr mein
          saansoon ka amal
          jarii tou hey magar
          zindagii hey kahaan
          dhoondh raha hoon
          sagarkhan:rose

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          • #6
            Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

            Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

            ufffffffff bhot zalim larki .... kamaal ki aur sacahi byan ki hay bhot khubsuart likha hay

            FeaamnAllah
            Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
            Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga


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            • #7
              Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

              Buhut zabardast, bilkul sach :thmbup:

              yeh daso phone kis ka aaya tha :p :D

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              • #8
                Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                Acha likha hay ......nazm likhne main aap ko kaamal hasil hay :) umdah likhti hain :)
                Allah

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                • #9
                  Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                  Originally posted by Kainat
                  v nice poem Komal sis :) :thmbup:
                  Thankx kainat ... :)

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                  • #10
                    Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                    Originally posted by SAGARKHAN
                    Bohut khoob:rose
                    Pasand kerny ka shukeriya Sagarkhan .. :)

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                    • #11
                      Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                      Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
                      Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

                      ufffffffff bhot zalim larki .... kamaal ki aur sacahi byan ki hay bhot khubsuart likha hay

                      FeaamnAllah
                      zalim ..!!

                      pasand kerny ka bayhud shukeriya ..:)

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                      • #12
                        Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                        Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                        Buhut zabardast, bilkul sach :thmbup:

                        yeh daso phone kis ka aaya tha :p :D

                        Thankx Saima :D:
                        Umm bataya to hai na nazm ma he ... US ka aya tha phone :wink

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                        • #13
                          Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                          Originally posted by Yaaram
                          Acha likha hay ......nazm likhne main aap ko kaamal hasil hay :) umdah likhti hain :)
                          Appriciate kerny ka bhoat dhair sara thakx yaaram :D:

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                          • #14
                            Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                            very nice....
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                            • #15
                              Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

                              Assalam_O_Alaikum,
                              bhat achhi nazm likhi hai aap nay komal....khush rahiey aur achha achha likhti rahiey...:rose
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