~ Hal - e- Dil ~

[aik_lerki]

:rose

[Masood]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Veri nice komal bohat achhi nazm likhi hai aap ney :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Veri nice komal bohat achhi nazm likhi hai aap ney :)

Thankx 4 appriciation .. :)

[Kainat]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

v nice poem Komal sis :) :thmbup:

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Bohut khoob:rose

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

ufffffffff bhot zalim larki .... kamaal ki aur sacahi byan ki hay bhot khubsuart likha hay

FeaamnAllah

['SamRazi']

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Buhut zabardast, bilkul sach :thmbup:

yeh daso phone kis ka aaya tha :p :D

[Yaaram]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Acha likha hay ......nazm likhne main aap ko kaamal hasil hay :) umdah likhti hain :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

v nice poem Komal sis :) :thmbup:

Thankx kainat ... :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Bohut khoob:rose

Pasand kerny ka shukeriya Sagarkhan .. :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

ufffffffff bhot zalim larki .... kamaal ki aur sacahi byan ki hay bhot khubsuart likha hay

FeaamnAllah

zalim ..!!

pasand kerny ka bayhud shukeriya ..:)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Buhut zabardast, bilkul sach :thmbup:

yeh daso phone kis ka aaya tha :p :D

Thankx Saima :D:
Umm bataya to hai na nazm ma he ... US ka aya tha phone :wink

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Acha likha hay ......nazm likhne main aap ko kaamal hasil hay :) umdah likhti hain :)

Appriciate kerny ka bhoat dhair sara thakx yaaram :D:

[Aania]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

very nice....

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~ Hal - e- Dil ~

Assalam_O_Alaikum,
bhat achhi nazm likhi hai aap nay komal....khush rahiey aur achha achha likhti rahiey...:rose