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[hayaa_n]

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Aik Lerki ji is waqt main aap ki bouhat pyari kawish parh k khush ho rahi hun k aap nasar k ilawa shairi bhi bouhat achi karti hain. :masha
mujh ko aap ki nazm main muntakhib huway lfzo'n nay mutassir kiya aur bouhat pasand aai aap ki nazm.baar baar parhnay ko dil chahay yeh nazm un nazmo'n main shumaar hoti hay. likhti rahiye ga.:)

[aik_lerki]

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Aik Lerki ji is waqt main aap ki bouhat pyari kawish parh k khush ho rahi hun k aap nasar k ilawa shairi bhi bouhat achi karti hain. :masha
mujh ko aap ki nazm main muntakhib huway lfzo'n nay mutassir kiya aur bouhat pasand aai aap ki nazm.baar baar parhnay ko dil chahay yeh nazm un nazmo'n main shumaar hoti hay. likhti rahiye ga.:)

Thank u soooo much haya
kuch zada he dhaair sare tareef nahe ker de Aaapnay:blush:

[hayaa_n]

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Thank u soooo much haya
kuch zada he dhaair sare tareef nahe ker de Aaapnay:blush:

Main aap ki yeh nazm again parh rahi hun..kis baat ka shukriya? shukriya to aap ka k aap nay itni achi nazm likhi aur read bhi karwai.waah kiya baat hay is nazm ki. :thmbup:

[aik_lerki]

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Main aap ki yeh nazm again parh rahi hun..kis baat ka shukriya? shukriya to aap ka k aap nay itni achi nazm likhi aur read bhi karwai.waah kiya baat hay is nazm ki. :thmbup:

:blush: :blush: :blush: Ab kiya kahon mai ..:eye:
aapki zara nawazi hai :wink

[hayaa_n]

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:blush: :blush: :blush: Ab kiya kahon mai ..:eye:
aapki zara nawazi hai :wink

Aap kuch nna kahiye bas :blush: :blush: :blush: kar mazeed likhti rahiye.:thmbup:

[aik_lerki]

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Aap kuch nna kahiye bas :blush: :blush: :blush: kar mazeed likhti rahiye.:thmbup:

ummm Okay janab :D:

[Hamsafar]

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Fantastic janab

[sham-e-mehfil]

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Bohat khob............

[shahid_naman]

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:blush: :)

nice yah intazar bahot he buri cheas ha apno ko apno sa juda kar dati ha

[Ali jee]

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bohat hi khubsurat nazm he aik larki ....... dad kabool ho

[*Hijab*]

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bohat he umda

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Aslam o Alikum,

pata nahi aapka ID he larki hai ya aap such much bhi larki hain.

Actullay jub main college main tha tu poetry likhna start ki. uss time meri class ki aik larki bhi poetry kiya karti thi. main hazaar koshish kar k bhi wesa likh nahi paata tha. coz larkiyon ko Allah Tallah ney sachey jazbaat or hasaass tabiyat di hai. wo zindgi k her pehloo ko buhat gehri nazar say dekhti hain

or aapki iss poem main yea baat saaf nazar aa rahi hai. intazaar ..... per buhat saari poetry parri hai main ney. lakin believe me kabhi aisa khubsurat khiyal read karney ko nahi mila

buhat he piyara likhti/likhtey hain aap.

[PUNJABI001]

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wah bohat he acha likha ha app na aik_lerki G..
wah wah
v.good

[life.]

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Bohat zabardast

[S.Athar]

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Bohat Khobsort Nazeem Tahrer Karnay par Reputatuin Ka Nazrana Qabool Farmian