Himmat

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assalamalikum

aaj kal mujh pay poetry ka bhoot sawar hoo gia hai :lol


:D:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Himmat

bas ik diya jaalao mohabbat ki raah mein
dekhna roshan sab shamein khud hee mil jaaen gee

bohat khoob Aanchal ji ...:thmbup: :phool:

[RulzZ]

Re: Himmat

assalamalikum

aaj kal mujh pay poetry ka bhoot sawar hoo gia hai :lol


:D:

aap jald az jald kisi jin walay baba say rujoo karaiN, yeh bhoot bohot khatarnak hota hai :(, waysay woh khushnasib hotay haiN jin par yeh bhoot khud sawar hojaiy, warna kuch loog zubardasti isay sawar kartay haiN :lol,, aap ki darj-e-bala ghazal maiN radeef to hai, qafia nahee :blush:, aur ghazal maiN qafia he sab say aiham hota hai , aap nazmaiN kehnay ki koshish karaiN, inshaAllah kamiyabi hogi :zuban:, aur shairi ki taraf tawajjah na daiN, yani khud say shairi karnay nay baitha karaiN, :na:, balkay sirf socha karaiN, jaysay jaysay sochti rahaiN gee, khaylat shairana andaz maiN aap kay samnay aatay rhaiN gaiy, yani misrooN ki sorat maiN, maslan koi baRi si baat sirf 5,6 Alfaz main zehen maiN aAjaiy gii. phir osay likh laiN :thmbup:, aik shair bohot choTa sa hai magar bohot say mani rakhta hai, shayad bashir sahab ka hai,,, "maiN oTha kar Ghazal bana donga......lafz jitnay giray paRay hongaiy"

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aap jald az jald kisi jin walay baba say rujoo karaiN, yeh bhoot bohot khatarnak hota hai :(, waysay woh khushnasib hotay haiN jin par yeh bhoot khud sawar hojaiy, warna kuch loog zubardasti isay sawar kartay haiN :lol,, aap ki darj-e-bala ghazal maiN radeef to hai, qafia nahee :blush:, aur ghazal maiN qafia he sab say aiham hota hai , aap nazmaiN kehnay ki koshish karaiN, inshaAllah kamiyabi hogi :zuban:, aur shairi ki taraf tawajjah na daiN, yani khud say shairi karnay nay baitha karaiN, :na:, balkay sirf socha karaiN, jaysay jaysay sochti rahaiN gee, khaylat shairana andaz maiN aap kay samnay aatay rhaiN gaiy, yani misrooN ki sorat maiN, maslan koi baRi si baat sirf 5,6 Alfaz main zehen maiN aAjaiy gii. phir osay likh laiN :thmbup:, aik shair bohot choTa sa hai magar bohot say mani rakhta hai, shayad bashir sahab ka hai,,, "maiN oTha kar Ghazal bana donga......lafz jitnay giray paRay hongaiy"

ji ghalatiyan bhi theek kartay jaian gay ahesta ahesta :D ..pehlay likh laian pher

['SamRazi']

Re: Himmat

Hmmm .. Aanchal ......... me ko kuch kuch :mm: .......
U ki tabiyat theikh hai :hhh:



mazaq ek taraf ..... sach mei buhut acha likha hai aakhri 2 shair buhut achey hain ..... :thmbup:

[shakeeel]

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bohat acha likha hai aap ne,
(ek choti si typing mistake hai, last shehr mein "shamhein")
dil ki bat ko khoobsurat andaz mein bayan karna hi shairy hai,
aur yeh kam aap ne khoob kiya hai. Kush raihey.

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(ek choti si typing mistake hai, last shehr mein "shamhein")
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ooooops ok theek kar doun gee :D:
abhi mery pc say sara pechla data urr chuka hai pher say likhna parey gee :tauba

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Re: Himmat

Hmmm .. Aanchal ......... me ko kuch kuch :mm: .......
U ki tabiyat theikh hai :hhh:



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:lol main nay soucha pehlay likh laian ghalatiyan bad main theek kartay rehain gay :lol

[Bheegi-Palkain]

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Asslam_O_AlikuM WR WB

YA u sab ko kya ho gya hay ... her aik poetry

FeaamnAllah

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Himmat

bohot khobsorat ghazal hay
or agar yeh bhoot hay tu i think iss ko charrha hi rehna chahieye
regards
uzma

[DIL]

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Aik ummdah ghazal kahi hai ............Acha laga paher ker :)

Khush rahiyea :)

[Z.]

Re: Himmat

assalamalikum

aaj kal mujh pay poetry ka bhoot sawar hoo gia hai :lol


:D:

:clap:

bohot khoob larki :thmbup:

tum ney mujhye ye link pehley kyun na di :P


khush raho :rose