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  • #16
    Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

    Originally posted by Fatimah
    aslaam_u_alikam
    bohat khubsoorat hey aap ka yeh kalam
    daad qabool kijiye
    wa alikum u slam:salam:

    thanks .. Fatima........ nazam pasand kernain ke shukia..........
    Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
    A must Watch..

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    • #17
      Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

      Originally posted by Jhumroo
      aapkii aazaad nazm paRhii aur pasand is aitebaar se aaii k mujhe aazaad shaa'irii pasand nahiiN magar aapkii nazm meN kaafii Had tak jadeediyat 'onqaa hai. be-tuke aur Ghair maanoos aur Ghair muravvij istilaahaat, talmiiHaat aur iste'aaraat nahiiN haiN...kaamiiyaab nazm hai aapkii...shukria share karne ke liye. :rose
      but bhut shkria ... jhumroo jee.. app nain kafi detail comments diya hain
      bhut hoslaa bahdaa hai app key comments pahd ker,, thanks a lot:phool:
      bus jhumroo jee.. jo mehsoos kertaa..... hoon woh lekh detaa hoon
      app log pasand kerty hain.. jis ke liye.. thanksssssssss
      Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
      A must Watch..

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      • #18
        Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

        Originally posted by Eshaa_wellwisher
        Adaab!!!
        bohat khoob .... Bohat Achhi aur gehri shairi hai aapki Tauseef...:thmbup:
        Aur compose bhi bohat khoobsoorti kiya hgai aap nay isey...Khush rahieey aur hamein Apnay achhay kalam se nawaztay rahieey :phool:
        thanks Eshaa.......:phool: ... thanks a lot.............:phool:
        Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
        A must Watch..

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        • #19
          Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

          Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

          Tariq bhot umda likha hay ... bahtreen

          Per Yha Mod kuch u ko bata nahi paa rhy hy ...

          Tarqi u apni Potery Main Shair to Nahi section main Post kya karo ... Ya section Poetry ka nahi hy ...

          Image lushhay ..

          FeaamnAllah
          Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
          Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga


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          • #20
            Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

            Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
            Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

            Tariq bhot umda likha hay ... bahtreen

            Per Yha Mod kuch u ko bata nahi paa rhy hy ...

            Tarqi u apni Potery Main Shair to Nahi section main Post kya karo ... Ya section Poetry ka nahi hy ...

            Image lushhay ..

            FeaamnAllah
            thanks BP nazam pasand kerny ka shkriya............:phool:
            section ke liye answer naz ke reply main diya hai....
            bus asy hi yeh section Mujy pasand hai..
            thanks again.....
            Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
            A must Watch..

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            • #21
              Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

              Originally posted by tauseeftariq
              thanks BP nazam pasand kerny ka shkriya............:phool:
              section ke liye answer naz ke reply main diya hai....
              bus asy hi yeh section Mujy pasand hai..
              thanks again.....
              Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

              Aap ki PAsnd hamari pasnd hay ...

              Me ko koi aytraaz nahi .. aap bashak karya ..

              FeaamnAllah
              Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
              Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga


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              • #22
                Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
                Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

                Aap ki PAsnd hamari pasnd hay ...

                Me ko koi aytraaz nahi .. aap bashak karya ..

                FeaamnAllah
                chalin jee achaa hai.. ab sub kush hain..:lol
                Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
                A must Watch..

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                • #23
                  Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                  hmmmmmmm.bohot khoubsorat
                  Hamain Khabar hai K ham Hain churag Akhir shab
                  ~~~HamaraY Baad Andaihra nahi Ujala Hai ~~~

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                  • #24
                    Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                    Originally posted by Say_lani
                    hmmmmmmm.bohot khoubsorat
                    thanks say lani.........:phool:
                    Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
                    A must Watch..

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                    • #25
                      Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                      buht khubsurataaaaat :thmbup: jari raki :rose
                      u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

                      :pr:

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                      • #26
                        Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                        thanks Hala......
                        Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
                        A must Watch..

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                        • #27
                          Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                          bahot khoob..khawab tootne ka dard wohi jane jinki aankhon mein chhale par gaye ho..mein is dard se guzri hun..aaj phir ye parhke dil bhar aaya.

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                          • #28
                            Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                            Originally posted by mahek
                            bahot khoob..khawab tootne ka dard wohi jane jinki aankhon mein chhale par gaye ho..mein is dard se guzri hun..aaj phir ye parhke dil bhar aaya.
                            Pasnd kernin ka bhut shukria mahek jee,,,


                            sahi khaa app nain ke as dard ka ahisaa wahi samjh sakty hain jo as darad sey guzry hoon

                            achaa ab roain mat.. ALLAH App ko khush rakhy.. A meen
                            Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
                            A must Watch..

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                            • #29
                              Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                              bht hi zaber10 :v
                              Bhulana Sakoo Gay Mujhe Bhool Kar Tum
                              Mein Aksar Tumhein Yaad Ata Rahonga
                              Kabhi Khuwab Ban Kar Kabhi Yaad Ban Kar
                              Mein Neendein Tumhari Churata Rahonga

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                              • #30
                                Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

                                thanks zeeshan
                                Zaid Hammid on Sawat War..
                                A must Watch..

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