Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

[tauseeftariq]

Slam Friends..
Aj Apni ek aur new nazam post ker rehaa hon
"aur gudia toot gai ke baad " jo nazam post kernain ka irada thaa us ko "skip" ker key filahal apna taza klaam
paish ker reha hoon..
apni ra-ey se zaroor nawaziye ga.....
ur comments are very important for me....

[Shaim]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

Walikum Assalam!!!:salam:

Buhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ziadaa khoobsoorat n gehrii poetry hai bhai.....:thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup:
Reallly its fantastic
glad 2 read it:rose

Me ko buhaat acchi lagii bhai:)
waiting 4 moree:lpop:

KHUSH RAHIYYE

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

Walikum Assalam!!!:salam:

Buhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ziadaa khoobsoorat n gehrii poetry hai bhai.....:thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup:
Reallly its fantastic
glad 2 read it:rose

Me ko buhaat acchi lagii bhai:)
waiting 4 moree:lpop:

KHUSH RAHIYYE

thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss piyari behna:phool:
sub sey first reply humari behana ka ....... humm yeh howi na baat......:clap:
bhaut shukria nazam pasnd kernin ka.........:phool:
ek nazam aur lekhi hai .. sada si nazam hai
woh baad main post ker don ga..
aur App bhi bhut khush rahiye hamisha,.......:phool: ...
shkar hai as bar app nain apny zahin ko "zehmat"
de ker koi indaza nahin lagyaa..:lol :lol
thankssssss........... again......... so nice of u:phool:

[Shaim]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss piyari behnaa:phool:
sub sey first reply humari behan ka ....... humm yeh howi na baat......:clap:
bhaut shukria pasnd nazam kernin ka.........:phool:
ek nazam aur lekh rahi hai .. sada si nazam hai
woh baad main post ker don ga..
aur App bhi bhut khush rahiye hamisha,.......:phool: ...
shkar hai as bar app nain apny zahin ko "zehmat"
de ker koi indaza nahin lagyaa..:lol :lol
thankssssss........... again......... so nice of u:phool:

Me hon hi sweet behna:eye:
thatz y sab se pehley me ne reply kara
me ko or ka wait rahey ga bhai.....u ki speed poems post kerney mai buhat slow ho gai hai thoori barhain na speed ko:cc:
:lol andaaza to lagaya hai....
per u ko pata hai na bhai me sare aam andaza......:kr: me ko farq nahi parey ga u ko parey ga
walkxxxxx

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

Me hon hi sweet behna:eye:
thatz y sab se pehley me ne reply kara
me ko or ka wait rahey ga bhai.....u ki speed poems post kerney mai buhat slow ho gai hai thoori barhain na speed ko:cc:
:lol andaaza to lagaya hai....
per u ko pata hai na bhai me sare aam andaza......:kr: me ko farq nahi parey ga u ko parey ga
walkxxxxx

hahah......... sahi khaa app nain behna
app nice n sweet behna ho...... aur app ka inadaza bhi kafi khatarnak hai.....
speed slow nahin kafi fast hai.......
per agher ek saath sub post ker din tu phir bhut loooong
gap ho jay ga.. so ahistaa ahistaa post ker reha hon
taa ka gap na aye.......
oks behaa......have fun

[Shaim]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

hahah......... sahi khaa app nain behna
app nice n sweet behna ho...... aur app ka inadaza bhi kafi khatarnak hai.....
speed slow nahin kafi fast hai.......
per agher ek saath sub post ker din tu phir bhut loooong
gap ho jay ga.. so ahistaa ahistaa post ker reha hon
taa ka gap na aye.......
oks behaa......have fun

me lit bit dangerous bhi hon na thatz y:blush:
hmmm ye bhi hai.......ok ahista ahista post karin per stop mat kijiye ga:thmbup:

KHUSH RAHIYYE!:salam:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

me lit bit dangerous bhi hon na thatz y:blush:
hmmm ye bhi hai.......ok ahista ahista post karin per stop mat kijiye ga:thmbup:

KHUSH RAHIYYE!:salam:

jo humkum behna....:salam: ..:phool:

[ummid]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

aap waqai mein bauhat acchi poetry likhte hain..:)
image bhi accha hai...:phool:
thanx for such a lovely but sad sharung..:thmbup:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

aap waqai mein bauhat acchi poetry likhte hain..:)
image bhi accha hai...:phool:
thanx for such a lovely but sad sharung..:thmbup:

bhut bhut shkria ummid,,,,,,,,,:phool:
nazam pasand kernin ka shkriya,,,,,,,,
Image ke liye kafi mehnat howi hai as baar 3 days
tek search ke hai ... tab meri nazam sey milti julti pic
mil hai.. phir photshop main kuch eidt ke ...
han sad tu hai....... per udasi bhi zingai ka ek rung
aur muhabbat ka iham hisaa hai
aur tareef ke liye.....thanx agian......:phool:

[naz]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

bhot achi nazam hia :rose

leken ap yeh "Main shair tu nahi" section main Post kiya kijeye ke waha apni shairi share ki jate hai :rose

[ummid]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

bhut bhut shkria ummid,,,,,,,,,:phool:
nazam pasand kernin ka shkriya,,,,,,,,
Image ke liye kafi mehnat howi hai as baar 3 days
tek search ke hai ... tab meri nazam sey milti julti pic
mil hai.. phir photshop main kuch eidt ke ...
han sad tu hai....... per udasi bhi zingai ka ek rung
aur muhabbat ka iham hisaa hai
aur tareef ke liye.....thanx agian......:phool:

aap ne sahi kaha sadnesss tu zindagi ka hissa hai...
waise bhai aap itni mehnat ker ke hume bauhat hi khush karte hain...:)
thank you..:phool:

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

aslaam_u_alikam
bohat khubsoorat hey aap ka yeh kalam
daad qabool kijiye

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

Adaab!!!
bohat khoob .... Bohat Achhi aur gehri shairi hai aapki Tauseef...:thmbup:
Aur compose bhi bohat khoobsoorti kiya hgai aap nay isey...Khush rahieey aur hamein Apnay achhay kalam se nawaztay rahieey :phool:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

bhot achi nazam hia :rose

leken ap yeh "Main shair tu nahi" section main Post kiya kijeye ke waha apni shairi share ki jate hai :rose

Nazam pasand karnain ka bhut shkria..........:phool:
as i said be4 ... yah Ehassa e muhbat he hai jo aadmi ko shir bana detaa hai..
mujhy ye section pasand hai.. as liye akser yhaan post ker detaa hoon

thanks again...

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ab Key Khwab Totaa Thaa....

aap ne sahi kaha sadnesss tu zindagi ka hissa hai...
waise bhai aap itni mehnat ker ke hume bauhat hi khush karte hain...:)
thank you..:phool:

App log khush ho jaty hain... mery liya yeh bhaut khushi ke baat hai..
ur always welcome sis..