Main Aur Wo

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Ye mere pehli nazm hai aaj se almost 3 years pehaly likhi thi share kar rahi hoon yahan...:)

Main Aur WO Baythay Thay Tanha
Sahil_e_samander pe
kar rahay tahy batein kuch khushi ki
Zindagi ki...
K achanak
hath us ka huaa buland fiza mein
AUr chaand ko dekh kar kaha us nay
dekho chaand to Tum sa roshan hai...
Sun k baat us ki muskura dee thi main
Haan magar aaj..
jab koi nahin hai pass meray
aur wo bhi nahin hai saath meray
Ehsas huaa Us sach ka
k Tab chaand mujh sa roshan tha
Aur Ab.....
Main chaand ki tarha tanha!!!

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Main Aur Wo

Ye mere pehli nazm hai aaj se almost 3 years pehaly likhi thi share kar rahi hoon yahan...:)

Main Aur WO Baythay Thay Tanha
Sahil_e_samander pe
kar rahay tahy batein kuch khushi ki
Zindagi ki...
K achanak
hath us ka huaa buland fiza mein
AUr chaand ko dekh kar kaha us nay
dekho chaand to Tum sa roshan hai...
Sun k baat us ki muskura dee thi main
Haan magar aaj..
jab koi nahin hai pass meray
aur wo bhi nahin hai saath meray
Ehsas huaa Us sach ka
k Tab chaand mujh sa roshan tha
Aur Ab.....
Main chaand ki tarha tanha!!!

Very NIce and wonderfull................................................................................................................

[Masood]

Re: Main Aur Wo

Ehsasaat ka ta'aluq to ander sey hai na, gar kisi ka ehsas zindah rahey to woh qareeb hota hai, chahey kitna hi door kyun na ho :) - aur jab ander hi insaan ka tanha ho jaey to mehfil mein bhi tanhaee mehsoos hoti hai...

Eshaa bohat achha likha agar yeh pehli thi to hamein mazeed ka intizaar shiddat sey rahey ga - good work should be continued :rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main Aur Wo

Assalam_O_Alaikum,
Thank you So Jhumroo and khalil:)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main Aur Wo

Ehsasaat ka ta'aluq to ander sey hai na, gar kisi ka ehsas zindah rahey to woh qareeb hota hai, chahey kitna hi door kyun na ho :) - aur jab ander hi insaan ka tanha ho jaey to mehfil mein bhi tanhaee mehsoos hoti hai...

Eshaa bohat achha likha agar yeh pehli thi to hamein mazeed ka intizaar shiddat sey rahey ga - good work should be continued :rose

ji bilkul sahi farmaya aap nay k jab ander hee tanha ho jaey to phir bhari mehfil mein bhi tanhaey ka aalam hota hai....aur mann mein ronaq ho to sab rang , sab pal hee aabad aur roshan lagtay hain......
Pazeeraeey k liey shukriya .....Khush rahieey.....:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

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U welCome

['SamRazi']

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buhut khoob dear :thmbup:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main Aur Wo

buhut khoob dear :thmbup:

Shukriya :phool:

[RulzZ]

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chand ka tazikra aatay he main nay andaza laga lia thaa kay tanhai ka zikr bhi zaror aaiyga.. :blush: , bohot umda nazam hai, aur bohot achay alfaz ka istemal kia hai aap nay. very nice :rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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chand ka tazikra aatay he main nay andaza laga lia thaa kay tanhai ka zikr bhi zaror aaiyga.. :blush: , bohot umda nazam hai, aur bohot achay alfaz ka istemal kia hai aap nay. very nice :rose

shukriya bohat bohat ......ji sahi kaha aap nay k chaand ka muqaddar tanhaeey hai ..us ki khoobsoorti us ki chaandi ko to hum mehsoos kertay hain ..per us ki tanhaeey kamm hee nazar aatee hai
thanks Again:phool:

[shakeeel]

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bohat achi nazam likhi hai aap ne. ilfaz ka intekhab bohat khoobsurat hai.

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:thmbup:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main Aur Wo

bohat achi nazam likhi hai aap ne. ilfaz ka intekhab bohat khoobsurat hai.

Assalam_o_alaikum
pazeeraeey k lieey shukriya:phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main Aur Wo

wow...bahot Khoob...balki bahot Khoob...

k Tab chaand mujh sa roshan tha
Aur Ab.....
Main chaand ki tarha tanha!!!

kitnaa pur-asar ENDING hai...dil ko chhoo kar dil meN hii ghar kar gaii aapkii baat. bajaa farmaayaa...Meena Kumari marHooma ne yehi kaha thaa apnii ek nazm meN:

chaand tanhaa hai, aasmaaN tanhaa

congratz on a beautiful nazm...:rose

Shukriya ...chhoti c koshish ko sarhnay ka:phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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:thmbup:

:phool: