ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

[najma]

sathiyo!
aadaab
apni ek ghazal lekar hazir hooN, ummeed hay pasand aeygii
agar na aey to bata dijiye
:lol

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

sathiyo!
aadaab
apni ek ghazal lekar hazir hooN, ummeed hay pasand aeygii
agar na aey to bata dijiye
:lol

Assalaam o alekum,


Najma baaaaji aapki yeh ghazal aur ghazloon ki tareh behud umdeh aur dilkash hai humaari jaanib se dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

shukriya khurram
lekin tum ne abhi poori ghazal nahi dekhii thii
ab dekho, main ne posting me kya gar bar ki hay
:embarasse
ab ise tum log hi sambhalo
:embarasse
pasandeedgii ka shukriya
:)

[Masood]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

ban key mahwar jo meri zeest sey wabasta tha
apni chahat ka yaqin us ko dila bhi na saki
is tarha sheesha-e-dil toot key bikhraa hai mera
main ney chaha keh uthaa loon, to utha bhi na saki
janey kn lafzon mein tajdeed-e-muhabbat ki thi
us ki takmeel kabhi saamney aa bhi na saki
merey ashaar ki takhleeq ka mojib tha wohi
jab woh aaya to ghazal usko suna bhi na saki



Najma aap ki yeh ghazal mujhey bohat pasand aai hai. Bohat khoobsurat andaaz mein aap ney tasweer kheenchi hai aur alfaaz ka jama pehnaya hai. Excellent. Keep it up :thmbup: :thmbup:

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

ban key mahwar jo meri zeest sey wabasta tha
apni chahat ka yaqin us ko dila bhi na saki
is tarha sheesha-e-dil toot key bikhraa hai mera
main ney chaha keh uthaa loon, to utha bhi na saki
janey kn lafzon mein tajdeed-e-muhabbat ki thi
us ki takmeel kabhi saamney aa bhi na saki
merey ashaar ki takhleeq ka mojib tha wohi
jab woh aaya to ghazal usko suna bhi na saki



Najma aap ki yeh ghazal mujhey bohat pasand aai hai. Bohat khoobsurat andaaz mein aap ney tasweer kheenchi hai aur alfaaz ka jama pehnaya hai. Excellent. Keep it up :thmbup: :thmbup:

bohat shukriya masood sahib!
is pazeeraaee ke liye maiN be-had mammnoon hooN
nawazish
:)

[handsome]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

Bohat acchi likhi hay :)

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

bohat shukriya handsome!
khush rahiye
:)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

woww najmaa
bohat he zabardast likhe hai aap nay
really mujhy bohaaaaaaaaat achii lage
thankx 4 sharing :rose

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

woww najmaa
bohat he zabardast likhe hai aap nay
really mujhy bohaaaaaaaaat achii lage
thankx 4 sharing :rose

laRkeeeeeeee jaaaaaan
tum ne khush kardiya.
baRa acha laga ke tumko meri kawish pasad aaee aur wo bhi itneeeeeeee pasannnnnnnnnnd
khush raho
thanx
:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

Najma Saahiba aap ka khubsoorat klaam pehlay bhi kai bar parha hey mugar yeh wali ghazal to baazi le gai:rose :rose :rose ...............Well done!!!!! Allah karay aap humesha khush rahein aur aap k qalam se aisee hi achi achi nazmein, ghazlein janum leti rahein.Ameeeen

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

Najma Saahiba aap ka khubsoorat klaam pehlay bhi kai bar parha hey mugar yeh wali ghazal to baazi le gai:rose :rose :rose ...............Well done!!!!! Allah karay aap humesha khush rahein aur aap k qalam se aisee hi achi achi nazmein, ghazlein janum leti rahein.Ameeeen

dear muskan!
tumharii is khoobsoorat aur bharpuur hausla afzaaee ke liye be-had mamnoon hooN.
sada khuish-o-khurram raho
:)

[Ambreen]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

bahut bahut zabardast nazm hai najma khala very nice

[najma]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

aray bhanjii jeeee
pasand karne ka bohat shukriya
lekin ye bhanjii kahaan se aagaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?:eye:

[hayaa_n]

Re: ek ghazal=bhula bhi na sakii=bu najma ansar najma

:) Najma ji yeh ghazal aur is ka aik aik shair rooh ko choo gaya hay.is say ziyada tareef kiya karu'n kay aap likhti hai'n aur aisa likhti hai'n kay mujhay to yeh bhi samajh nahi'n aa'ta kay itnay khubsurat kalaam ki taareef mai'n alfaaz kiya istimaal karu'n?

Aap ki Fan Haya (garmiyo'n mai'n is Haya Fan ko Pankha samajhiye ga)