Miss Call

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

:cc: ye saab bhai aisee hii hoote hain behnoon ko taalne waale

........nahin nahin...... yaar,,,,,,,,,, yeh behnain ..bhion ke muhabbat ko
samjhti nahin..... bahi behnon sey kaam kerwaty hain taa ke woh kaam kerna seikh jain... "itnaa" khiyal kon rekhtaa hai kisi ka??:cc: :khi:

[Shaim]

Re: Miss Call

........nahin nahin...... yaar,,,,,,,,,, yeh behnain ..bhion ke muhabbat ko
samjhti nahin..... bahi behnon sey kaam kerwaty hain taa ke woh kaam kerna seikh jain... "itnaa" khiyal kon rekhtaa hai kisi ka??:cc: :khi:

SAAB BHAI IK HI JEESE HOOTE HAIN TEZ QISM K :tauba

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

SAAB BHAI IK HI JEESE HOOTE HAIN TEZ QISM K :tauba

hahaha.. :lol :lol akhir man hi liya na ke bhai ziyda zaheen hotey hain..

[Shaim]

Re: Miss Call

hahaha.. :lol :lol akhir man hi liya na ke bhai ziyda zaheen hotey hain..

zaheeeeen naheee........brothers teeez hoote hain Auntioon k jeese teez se:khi:

[Yaaram]

Re: Miss Call

Bohat KHoob :) Moving to Main Sha'ir to Nahi :)

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

zaheeeeen naheee........brothers teeez hoote hain Auntioon k jeese teez se:khi:

behnaa ........ker di na akhir ladkiyon wali baat... baat manani nahin
bus ...... na na kernaa hai...... :lol :lol :lol
ab koi doodh(milk) ko black color ka kehtaa rahy.. per us ka rang tu nahin badalta na..haa:lol :lol aisi tarah brother ke zahant ko jo bhi naam dien
hai tu woh zahnat he..:lol

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

Bohat KHoob :) Moving to Main Sha'ir to Nahi :)

tareef ke bhut shkria.....yaaram...........

[shummu]

Re: Miss Call

wow nice...aaj ke daur ke hisaab se nazm likhi hai aapne..cool..I like it..jiddat honi chahiye shayri mein ..very well done!! Its beautiful...keep it up.....:thmbup:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

wow nice...aaj ke daur ke hisaab se nazm likhi hai aapne..cool..I like it..jiddat honi chahiye shayri mein ..very well done!! Its beautiful...keep it up.....:thmbup:

thanks shumu..... pasand kernin ke liye.....
bus app log pasand kerty hain as lieye .. thoda confidence hota hai new poem post kernin ka..
thanks agian

[aik_lerki]

Re: Miss Call

:thmbup:
Bohat achaa likha hai ap nay ..:rose

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

:thmbup:
Bohat achaa likha hai ap nay ..:rose

thanks ......... aik achi lerki :lol
thanks.....:phool:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Miss Call

apni nai nazam "miss call" post ker rehaa hoon.
umeed kertaa hon app pasand karin gey ..
app ke comments mery liye bhut iham hain.

jin doston nain meri pehli do nazamin padhin hain un ke khidmat main
araaz hain key us silsly ke 3rd nazam "pehli baar" kuch din bad post karoon ga..
ur comments are veryyyyyyy important... so please... zarooor izhar e khiyal kejiye

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Ya mujhy bhot pasnd hay aur kai baar main parhta hu pata nahi kuo

FeaamnAllah

[Aatif Saeed]

Re: Miss Call

Bohat Khobsoorat Nazm hai aap kee

Nazuk ehsasaat ke malik

isi ziman main likha hua apna aik sher yaad aa gaya

Abhi tum ne mujhay socha, mujhay iss ne bataiya hai
Mairay Cell Phone per nuber tumhara jhilmilaiya hai

Thanx for sharing

Aatif