Miss Call

[tauseeftariq]

apni nai nazam "miss call" post ker rehaa hoon.
umeed kertaa hon app pasand karin gey ..
app ke comments mery liye bhut iham hain.

jin doston nain meri pehli do nazamin padhin hain un ke khidmat main
araaz hain key us silsly ke 3rd nazam "pehli baar" kuch din bad post karoon ga..
ur comments are veryyyyyyy important... so please... zarooor izhar e khiyal kejiye

['SamRazi']

Re: Miss Call

:masha Buhut hi pyarey se ehsas ke barey mei likha hai :thmbup:


Shukriya share kerne ka, aur umeed hai aainda bhi share kertey rahein gai :insha:

[*Rida*]

Re: Miss Call

Assalma-o-Alaikom:rose

so nice n simple
sochain tu buht deep:)
having inner happiness:)

[*Rida*]

Re: Miss Call

Assalma-o-Alaikom:rose

so nice n simple
sochain tu buht deep:)
having inner happiness:)

[rehman]

Re: Miss Call

wah wah zabardast koshash hai...... :)

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

:masha Buhut hi pyarey se ehsas ke barey mei likha hai :thmbup:


Shukriya share kerne ka, aur umeed hai aainda bhi share kertey rahein gai :insha:

thanks . Insha ALLAH app doston ka saath rehaa tu zarror yeh silsla jari rahy gaa ..:phool:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

Assalma-o-Alaikom:rose

so nice n simple
sochain tu buht deep:)
having inner happiness:)

thanks rida for such nice comments.. thanks

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

wah wah zabardast koshash hai...... :)

shkria rehman ... bus aj kal yahi koshi hai jo fellings hon un ko nazam
main dhalla jay dekhin ab kab tek yeh kafiyat rahti hai
thanks again..

[Withoutsoul]

Re: Miss Call


HMMMMMMMMM....
NICE

[sufiaamir]

Re: Miss Call

fine

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

HMMMMMMMMM....
NICE

shkria app nain sochaa kafi der per nice keh diya .. :lol
thanks

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

fine

thanx:phool:

[Shaim]

Re: Miss Call

wow.........again ik buhat pyari c poem!!!
Really nice work tauseef bhai!:thmbup: :thmbup:
Excellent...Brilliant!:clap:
apne apni poem mai real feelings ko zaahir kiya hai.....GR8

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Miss Call

wow.........again ik buhat pyari c poem!!!
Really nice work tauseef bhai!:thmbup: :thmbup:
Excellent...Brilliant!:clap:
apne apni poem mai real feelings ko zaahir kiya hai.....GR8

thanks piyari behnaa .. app ke reply ka intezaar thaa mujey..
bhut shukria pasand kernaa ka..
app ka indaza ek baar phir bulku sahi hai .. yeh waqi real life feelings thin..haha

[Shaim]

Re: Miss Call

thanks piyari behnaa .. app ke reply ka intezaar thaa mujey..
bhut shukria pasand kernaa ka..
app ka indaza ek baar phir bulku sahi hai .. yeh waqi real life feelings thin..haha

np.com bhai!:)
shukerya k liye bhi np.com....:lpop:
Hmmm yaani main phirr jeet gai:lpop: wow........me kaa inaam?:khi:
i was also waiting 4 ur next poem keep it up bhai!:thmbup: