ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

[fazal khan]

,,,Slaam Dosto,,,
thori der ki khamoshi ke baad ab phir, aik kalam le kar hazir hon,apki rahnumai ka muntazir rahon ga,,,,
Apki aara ka muntazir,,,,

[great_pisces]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

nice poetry

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

nice poetry

:roseThank u so much.........:rose
:phool:

[Shahdil]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

:bohtumdaa:...Boht Hee Achhee Ghazal Hai...

[Ali jee]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

KHan jee buhat achi ghazal likhe hi ghazal ki rawani Buhat umdha dad kabool karin

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

:bohtumdaa:...Boht Hee Achhee Ghazal Hai...

thank u so much bhi jan,,,,,,rose

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

KHan jee buhat achi ghazal likhe hi ghazal ki rawani Buhat umdha dad kabool karin

thanks Ali bhi hosla afzai ka bahut bahut shukria,,,,,
:phool:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

bahot khoob janab
bahot achhi gazal likhi hai aap ne

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

bahot khoob janab
bahot achhi gazal likhi hai aap ne

Bahut shukria Wasi Anjum ji apka,,,
God Bless u,,,,:phool:

[muneeb143]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

Bohat Achay Janab Keep Sharing

[shummu]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

wah bahut khoob..!

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

Bohat Achay Janab Keep Sharing

Bahut shukria janab,,,,,,God bless u:phool:

[fazal khan]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

wah bahut khoob..!

Shummu ji apka bhi bahut bahut shukria,,,,,Doaon main yaad rakhna
God bless u,,,,,:rose

[Gul]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

Nice Poetry Fazal ..Keep Going ..:)

[SherAli]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

Fazal Khan saaHib
salam alaikum

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur bhali bhi lagii. aapne nihayat munfarid radeef kaa intiKhaab kiyaa hai aur Khoob nibhaayaa hai. meri jaanib se daad o taHseen qubool farmaaiye.

aap ne chuN k rahnumai kii Khowaahish zaahir kii hai is liye do ek baateN kahne kii jasaarat kartaa huN. ummeed hai k aap ise sirf dostaana sujhaao hii samjheNge aur isse kisii tanqeed ya tanqees kaa koi pahloo na nikaaleNge. phir bhi, agar merii koii baat giraaN-baar-e-tab'a guzre to mo'aaf farmaaiyegaa. shukria.

aapkii ghazal ke beshtar ash'aar bil_Khusoos misra-e-saanii Khaarij-ul-bahr haiN aur kahiiN kahiiN aapne qawaafii kii jo soorateN bandhii haiN vo Ghair munaasib haiN aur shairi ke qawaa'id kii roo se Ghair-qaanoonii bhii. kahiiN kahiiN alfaaz ke saHeeH talaffuz se bhii ruKhsat lii hai aapne ne jis ke baa'is misr'a Khaarij az bahr ho gayaa hai. aap se iltimaas hai k aap nazar-e-saanii farmaa leN aur jin aGhlaat kii tasHeeH mumkin ho vo farmaa leN. shukria.

_______Sheroo