ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

[fazal khan]

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Fazal Khan saaHib
salam alaikum

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur bhali bhi lagii. aapne nihayat munfarid radeef kaa intiKhaab kiyaa hai aur Khoob nibhaayaa hai. meri jaanib se daad o taHseen qubool farmaaiye.

aap ne chuN k rahnumai kii Khowaahish zaahir kii hai is liye do ek baateN kahne kii jasaarat kartaa huN. ummeed hai k aap ise sirf dostaana sujhaao hii samjheNge aur isse kisii tanqeed ya tanqees kaa koi pahloo na nikaaleNge. phir bhi, agar merii koii baat giraaN-baar-e-tab'a guzre to mo'aaf farmaaiyegaa. shukria.

aapkii ghazal ke beshtar ash'aar bil_Khusoos misra-e-saanii Khaarij-ul-bahr haiN aur kahiiN kahiiN aapne qawaafii kii jo soorateN bandhii haiN vo Ghair munaasib haiN aur shairi ke qawaa'id kii roo se Ghair-qaanoonii bhii. kahiiN kahiiN alfaaz ke saHeeH talaffuz se bhii ruKhsat lii hai aapne ne jis ke baa'is misr'a Khaarij az bahr ho gayaa hai. aap se iltimaas hai k aap nazar-e-saanii farmaa leN aur jin aGhlaat kii tasHeeH mumkin ho vo farmaa leN. shukria.

_______Sheroo

:phool: Bahut shukria janab rahnumai ka main inshallah jald hi iski islah kr kr dobara post kronga,,,,thank u so much

[MeemSheenAlif]

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Fazal Khan saaHib
salam alaikum

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur bhali bhi lagii. aapne nihayat munfarid radeef kaa intiKhaab kiyaa hai aur Khoob nibhaayaa hai. meri jaanib se daad o taHseen qubool farmaaiye.

aap ne chuN k rahnumai kii Khowaahish zaahir kii hai is liye do ek baateN kahne kii jasaarat kartaa huN. ummeed hai k aap ise sirf dostaana sujhaao hii samjheNge aur isse kisii tanqeed ya tanqees kaa koi pahloo na nikaaleNge. phir bhi, agar merii koii baat giraaN-baar-e-tab'a guzre to mo'aaf farmaaiyegaa. shukria.

aapkii ghazal ke beshtar ash'aar bil_Khusoos misra-e-saanii Khaarij-ul-bahr haiN aur kahiiN kahiiN aapne qawaafii kii jo soorateN bandhii haiN vo Ghair munaasib haiN aur shairi ke qawaa'id kii roo se Ghair-qaanoonii bhii. kahiiN kahiiN alfaaz ke saHeeH talaffuz se bhii ruKhsat lii hai aapne ne jis ke baa'is misr'a Khaarij az bahr ho gayaa hai. aap se iltimaas hai k aap nazar-e-saanii farmaa leN aur jin aGhlaat kii tasHeeH mumkin ho vo farmaa leN. shukria.

_______Sheroo

app ko bahr aur ma'fa'lun wagera pata he kia hota he??

[*Hala*]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

deer shukali mo lekhaly di...

[SherAli]

Re: ميں واپس لوٹ آؤں گا

:phool: Bahut shukria janab rahnumai ka main inshallah jald hi iski islah kr kr dobara post kronga,,,,thank u so much

shukria Fazal saaHib aapkaa k aapne meri baatoN kaa buraa nahiiN maanaayaa :) ji, zaroor :)

[SherAli]

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app ko bahr aur ma'fa'lun wagera pata he kia hota he??

hahaha...pataa to anhiiN k kia hotaa hai par andaaz lagaa letaa huN hahaha.

kahte haiN k meraa hai andaaz e tafahhum aur ;)

[fazal khan]

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thanks,,,,,
app ko bahr aur ma'fa'lun wagera pata he kia hota he??

ji mujhy ziada to nahi pata magar apny Ustad-e-Muhtram Daman Ansaari Sahb ki khidmaat hasil kronga,,,,,,,,

[fazal khan]

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deer shukali mo lekhaly di...

:rose Thanx Hala Ji....:rose
Staaso Dera dera shukria,Staso monga hosla afzai wokra....
Zama lo taraf na,,,, Akhtar Mubarak,,,,,
:phool:God Bless U:phool: