Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

again misra behr mein nahi hai..Ali aap jaldbaazi na karein..aap pehle dekhein behr kya hai..wazan kya hai..maine upar darj kiya hai phir us pe koshish karein misre ke alfaaz ko break karke baithaane ki...1- choti aawaaz,2=badi aawaaz...uske baad use gungunaa ke bhi dekhein usi tarz pe ya diye gaye mashoor ghazla ke tarz pe..aap ko khud ehsaas hoga kahan aapki zubaan aTak rahi hai..All the best...:thmbup: waise is misre ko aap aisa kar dein to behr mein aa jaayega..

jab kabhi baat chali,tere ishaaron se chali

phir bhi msre mein dam nahi hai... aur behtar girah ki tawaqqo hai :)

yahan behr ke mutaaliq kayi articles maujood hain..aap zaroor usko parhein..inshallah madad milegi behr samajhne mein .

gunguna he wazan nahi hota aye bhi ak tareka hi as k elawa bhi hi ........ wazan ko uper nichey k alfaz se bhi napa jata hi or as elawa share ka kulya hi wazan dhanai ka

falon feylat
mar ghosa mar lat 372-haha aye ak kulya hi jo ehan likha hi
bhar hall app mod hi or or bhtreen shaera bhi main na cheez tu abi Tafle maktab hon .....
bhar hall app mare sharing ko shamil na kare
balkai main tu boloo ga next time pore ghazal likhnai ko dain only ak masra nahi as tarhan kafe work nekhrai ga new liknai walon ga ....
just aye ak mashwra hi :salam:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

salaam
app kiss indaz sey masrai ko dekh rahi ?
gunguna kar he wazan nahi hota as k elawa bhi wazan k dekhnai k buhat sey tarikai hi
app nai kiss indaz par masrai ko parkha hi aye app jante hi
so ager app ko sahi nahi lagraha ko in ko shamil na kare
koy masla nahi hi apna buhat khyal rakhey

Allha hafiz

maine upar wazan diya hai behr ka..gungunaane ke ilawa us pe bhi aapka misra nahi baith raha ..aap khud apne misre ko break karke is wazan pe karke dikhaaiye agar aap sure hain :)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

gunguna he wazan nahi hota aye bhi ak tareka hi as k elawa bhi hi ........ wazan ko uper nichey k alfaz se bhi napa jata hi or as elawa share ka kulya hi wazan dhanai ka

falon feylat
mar ghosa mar lat 372-haha aye ak kulya hi jo ehan likha hi
bhar hall app mod hi or or bhtreen shaera bhi main na cheez tu abi Tafle maktab hon .....
bhar hall app mare sharing ko shamil na kare
balkai main tu boloo ga next time pore ghazal likhnai ko dain only ak masra nahi as tarhan kafe work nekhrai ga new liknai walon ga ....
just aye ak mashwra hi :salam:

phir wahi baat sirf gungunaa ke maine faisla nahi kiya ke aapna misra behr mein hai ke nahi..saath maine di gayi behr ke arkaan ke wazan pe bhi use naap ke dekha.. :lahoul

2 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2 ,2 2 (1 1 2)


samjhe?


han aapke mashware waali baat pehle se hi mere zehn mein hai..pehle log girah lagana aur use behr mein likhna seekh lein..uske baad next step hoga poori ghazal likhna :thmbup:

[fazal khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

teri chaahat ko zamaane se chhupaon kab tak,,,
'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

bahut khoob... aap ki participation ka bhi behad shukriya fazal sahab...:salam:

asl mein mere paas kuch dinon se pegham khul nahi paa raha tha jiski wajah se main aa na saki idhar...ab inshallah polling shuru hogi .aur ramzan ki wajah se waqt nahi nikaal paati hun aajkal.next misra inshallah next maheene ki pehli taareekh ko diya jaayega.aayenda bhi ummeed hai aap hissa lete rahenge :thmbup: