Bikhray huye lafz ....

[Yaaram]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

Muskan aap ki aik aur Umdah nazm parhne ko mili bohat zabrdast hay.....kamal ka likha hay keep writing :)

[Rabi]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

bikhray lafzon ko smaitnay ki justaju hey
mahnon se manoos honay ki arzu hey
mugar ab to yeh aalam hey
sochain bhi ajnbi hein



Bohat accha likha pp nay Muskan sis:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

Rabi sis aap ka boht shukriya k aap ko mujh na cheez ki yeh koshish pasand aai.

[zain]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

bahot khoob ji,:masha ,bahot khoobsurat andaz main likhti hain aap,
bahot khush rahiye aor likhti rahiye.

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

Zain sub se pehlay aap ko PEGHAM per :welcome: kehti hoon.


Aap ko nazm pasand aai, aap ka behadd o hisaab shukriya.:rose :rose :rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

wha .....
kaya ma pooch sakta hoon ka app koi ketab be likh rahi haan ka nahi...?

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

wha .....
kaya ma pooch sakta hoon ka app koi ketab be likh rahi haan ka nahi...?

sorry to all my PEGHAM FELLOWS for being very late, Nmi Sialkoti ji mera aisa koi iraada nhi hey kiyun k abhi to bhut kuch seekhna baqi hey aur zindagi bhut thori hey kitab likhnay k liye k iss ka mazmoon bhut waseeh hey. shukriya :)

[SherAli]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

salaam,

welcome back. chuN k maiN yahaN nayaa huN aur aap punaaii member aur aapko kabhii dekhaa nahiin forum par is liye aapko welcome back kahaa. :)

aapkaa kalaam paRhaa. masha Allah aap to bahot Khoob likhtii haiN. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada!

aapkii is aazaad nazm meN alfaaz kii bandish chust aur Khayaalaat kaa bahaao mutanaasib hai. achchhe jazbaat aur aHsaasaat ko sameTaa hai apnii qalam ke Hisaar meN. Allah kare zor e raqam aur ziyaada!

faqat muKhlis,
_______Sheroo

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

Welcom e back janab

bahot khoob bahot achha likha hai

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

salaam,

welcome back. chuN k maiN yahaN nayaa huN aur aap punaaii member aur aapko kabhii dekhaa nahiin forum par is liye aapko welcome back kahaa. :)

aapkaa kalaam paRhaa. masha Allah aap to bahot Khoob likhtii haiN. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada!

aapkii is aazaad nazm meN alfaaz kii bandish chust aur Khayaalaat kaa bahaao mutanaasib hai. achchhe jazbaat aur aHsaasaat ko sameTaa hai apnii qalam ke Hisaar meN. Allah kare zor e raqam aur ziyaada!

faqat muKhlis,_______Sheroo

bhut shukriya sheroo bhai, mein waqaee mein aik lumbay arsay tak yehan se ghair haazir thi. jub jub waqt milay ga haazir hoti rhoon gi.

aap ne itni pzeeraai ki halaan k mein iss qabil nhi hoon, tifl e maktab hoon koshish kerti hoon aap sub ka, housla afzaai k kiye be hadd shukriya.:)

[SherAli]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

bhut shukriya sheroo bhai, mein waqaee mein aik lumbay arsay tak yehan se ghair haazir thi. jub jub waqt milay ga haazir hoti rhoon gi.

aap ne itni pzeeraai ki halaan k mein iss qabil nhi hoon, tifl e maktab hoon koshish kerti hoon aap sub ka, housla afzaai k kiye be hadd shukriya.:)

u r most welcome :)

[uzair143]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

nice
keep it up
Uzair

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

nice
keep it up
Uzair

Thanx alot uzair. :)

[Gul]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

itni bheerr mein itni tunhaai!
koi apna chehra nah shanasaai
shab e umar bhi guzer jaye gi
kisi badel ki kahyesh nhi
kisi khushi ki tlash nhi
jeeti hoon bass
sard bahanon k sath
be mahni lafzon k khel mein
dil ki azmayesh mein
mahnon ki tlash mein
bikhray lafzon ko smaitnay ki justaju hey
mahnon se manoos honay ki arzu hey
mugar ab to yeh aalam hey
sochain bhi ajnbi hein
jaisay meray apnay log
khushiyan bhi begani hein
jaisay meray dil k rog
............................

Wah Khoob likha ...teddy
and kafi salooN pehlay ....likha 372-scare
mein nay aaj kioN parHa??372-shock

Anyway ..:) loved it :) '

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bikhray huye lafz ....

Wah Khoob likha ...teddy
and kafi salooN pehlay ....likha 372-scare
mein nay aaj kioN parHa??372-shock

Anyway ..:) loved it :) '

hnmmmm Miss masroof saahiba (i mean GUL) haan! aap bataiye k aap ne pehlay kiyun nhi parha?:fuming:

anyway thanx alot k parha aur pasand kiya.:phool: