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salam alikum
dosto aik aur ghazal aap ki bazm main paish hai
umeed hai pasand aaey gi
dosto aik aur ghazal aap ki bazm main paish hai
umeed hai pasand aaey gi
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
bahut nice
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
kuch our dair rahny day pholon main khushboaain
dast-e-khizaan abhi say na fasl-e-bahar kheench
wah bohat he khubsurat , bohat si daad qubol kijiye :rose
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
masha allah .............. wazan acha hey ............ good one
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MashAllah , bohat hi umda shairi hai, aur andaz bi payara hai..
thori bohti tarash kharash kartay raha karain..
7th shair ko aisay parh kar daikhain..
Phir Rang Ban kar Saray Ufaq Par Ubhroo'N Ga Mein...
Mujh ko Meray Wajood se bas eik Baar Khainch...
Yeh apki hosla shikni nahi hai mein ne tasalsal mein aisay hi parha lekin baad mein ghour se parha tu , Basoo'N parha , mera khayal hai basnay se Ubharna zayada wazan rakhta hai...
Baqi apne bohat achi ghazal likhi hai... ab pata nai ap ne kia sooch kar likha hai tu phir waisay zayada strong ho kia pata ... mujh nacheez se bi ghalti ho sakti hai so please bura nai manye ga bhai .
Khush rahain.Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!Comment
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bohot shukriyyaOriginally posted by raafi View PostComment
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bohot shukriyya pehli barishOriginally posted by Pehli``Barish View Post
khush raho sadaComment
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Originally posted by Ali jee View Post
bohot shukriyya ali jee
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salam alikum GushudaOriginally posted by GumShuda View Post
bohot shukriyya ap nay ghazal ko parha aur pasand farmaya
mere khyaal main bhai jee kay lafz.. ubhroon.. wazan say kharij ho jaey ga.... lafz.. basoN.. hi exect wazan par aa raha hai...
ap zara aik dafa phir parhain... shayad sahi lagay...
khushh rahin sada aap
dheron duaainComment
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
Okies , ap behtar janntay ho ap per warid howi aur ap ne likh dali. :dOriginally posted by Hashim Raza View PostKis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!Comment
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
Waah janab Hashim sahib
bahoot achha likhtay ho aap bahoot khoobsurat gazal hai
likhtay rahen khush rahensigpic
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Re: Aey Chandni Tuu Chaand Kay Aagay Hisaar Khainch
Buhat Khoobsurat ...Zindagi Thak Gaye ..!!
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thanks:roseOriginally posted by GumShuda View PostComment
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bohot shukriyya wasi anjum sahabOriginally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
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bohot shukriyyaOriginally posted by La'hasil View PostComment
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