teri yaad

[khamoshian*tanhayean]

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Good buhat achay

[khamoshian*tanhayean]

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hello anni ap buhat achahi shary kertay ho

[Aania]

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hello anni ap buhat achahi shary kertay ho

thanks you so much Khamoshyan*tanhayan ...
welcome to Pegham

khush rahye

[phototech81]

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nice baoht khub hai aap ki poetry nice


acha main aap sy puchna chahtahon keya marya bi section ban saktahai poetry main plz

[ahsaas]

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yunhi bewajah teri yaad phir mere raaston mein ruki huii

mujh se poochti saath chalti hawa, aaj akeli kion hoon

kese keh bhi doon wo jo raston pe gamzan mera hamsafar

merey sath tha nayee xindagi ke raaston meiin kho gyaa

haan wo ab mera nahen kisi aur raastey ka musafir huaa

aie hawa bata tujhey yaad kion aaney lagi guzrey pal ki

aie hawa bata meri dharrkanon ko kionkar phir bechain kia
chalo chorro bhi ye zikr ab dil ka zakhm to thehra lekin

ye pal dawa nahen, merey rastey meri manzilen

meri mushkilen aasanyaan, merey naseeb ke den hein

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa

tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb ....!!!!

by me ( A )

Beautiful............
her lafz mein gahraiii..............buhat kamal hasil hai aapko..lafzon ko terteeb deny mein .......

khush rahiye:rose

[Aania]

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Beautiful............
her lafz mein gahraiii..............buhat kamal hasil hai aapko..lafzon ko terteeb deny mein .......

khush rahiye:rose

aap bhi khush rahye
bohat shukryaa pazeeraii ka

[gazal_uzma]

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Aania

bohot impressive hay yeh kawish

thanks 4 sharing
regards
uzma