teri yaad

[Aania]

yunhi bewajah teri yaad phir mere raaston mein ruki huii

mujh se poochti saath chalti hawa, aaj akeli kion hoon

kese keh bhi doon wo jo raston pe gamzan mera hamsafar

merey sath tha nayee xindagi ke raaston meiin kho gyaa

haan wo ab mera nahen kisi aur raastey ka musafir huaa

aie hawa bata tujhey yaad kion aaney lagi guzrey pal ki

aie hawa bata meri dharrkanon ko kionkar phir bechain kia
chalo chorro bhi ye zikr ab dil ka zakhm to thehra lekin

ye pal dawa nahen, merey rastey meri manzilen

meri mushkilen aasanyaan, merey naseeb ke den hein

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa

tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb ....!!!!


by me ( A )

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: teri yaad

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa
tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb

hey aani...tum itni sensative poetry kub se kerne lagi...very nice dear bohat umda :hug:

[Aania]

Re: teri yaad

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa
tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb

hey aani...tum itni sensative poetry kub se kerne lagi...very nice dear bohat umda :hug:

jab se tum miley ho ..... :lol
:hug:

[Masood]

Re: teri yaad

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa
tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb ....!!!!

aania I am really impressed by your way of describing feelings - such nice use of words :)

Apna apna naseeb hai tu aur kisi key qareeb hai
tujh ko pukaroon gali gali keh duniya bani raqeeb hai

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: teri yaad

nihayat hee khubsurat carry on urs

[Aania]

Re: teri yaad

aania I am really impressed by your way of describing feelings - such nice use of words :)

Apna apna naseeb hai tu aur kisi key qareeb hai
tujh ko pukaroon gali gali keh duniya bani raqeeb hai

:phool:
thnx u so much to come n read my poetry.......... bohat bohat shukria ji.....khush rahye .....be shiny with candle of success

[Aania]

Re: teri yaad

nihayat hee khubsurat carry on urs

O ji welcome ji welcome .....khush keeta aie kasmen tusi vi sanu saadey kaar aa ke....... mehrbani ji barri barri.... :lol .thnx to appreciate dude.......... :phool::phool::phool::phool: :hug:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: teri yaad

gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa
tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

aap kya kha gai hy is shiar main shayd aap ko andaza na ho per is puray shair main aik dastaan qaid kar li

Bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: teri yaad

kese keh bhi doon wo jo raston pe gamzan mera hamsafar

merey sath tha nayee xindagi ke raaston meiin kho gyaa


Honestly kho yaqeen nahi arha ky ya aap ka shair hy ..... i mean hy aap ka hi per Mashaalh bhot umdagi sey chun chun kr khyalto ko shairo main mukmal kar diya aap ny

FeaamNAlalh

[Yaaram]

Re: teri yaad

Bass aani insaan itna hi kehta reh jata hay
gila nahen shikwa nahen jo bhi huaa acha huaa

tumhen apni manzilen mubarik, mujhey mere pal naseeb ....!!!!
Bohat umdah likha hay :)

[Shaim]

Re: teri yaad

Hmmm grr8 poetry...
keep it up sis....u can b a very good poet:)

[Aania]

Re: teri yaad

thnx BP Yaaram n Barish....

[rehman]

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zabardast poetry hai................ :)

[Kainat]

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Hey Aaina sis Ur poetry is really very nice..:thmbup: :phool: Thanx fo sharin ..... :)

[Aania]

Re: teri yaad

zabardast poetry hai................ :)

thnx u so much ji ....