Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

[م۔م۔مغل]

aap aHbaab kii raa'ay kaa intiZaar rahy gaa.

niyaaz mand

miim miim mughal

[La'hasil]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Yahaan Ziyada Acha Response Miley ga Aap ko :rose


Aur Buhat Khooob Likha Aap nay

Buhat Umdaah :rose

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Yahaan Ziyada Acha Response Miley ga Aap ko :rose


Aur Buhat Khooob Likha Aap nay

Buhat Umdaah :rose

buhat shukriya' piyaaray SaaHib.
maiN intihaa'ee mamnoon-o-mutashakir hooN.....:salam:
keh aap nay mery klaam par pasndiidgii kaa iZhaar farmaayaa.
Taalib-Khair
miim miim mughal

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

bahoot he zabardast gazal likhi hai aap ne
aap ki next sharing ka intazzar rahega
khush rahen

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

bahoot he zabardast gazal likhi hai aap ne
aap ki next sharing ka intazzar rahega
khush rahen

پیارے صاحب
وصی انجم ۔۔۔
آداب وسلامِ مسنون
بہت شکریہ آپ نے مجھ ناچیز کے کلام کو شرفِ پسندیدگی بخشا۔
جلد یا بہ دیر انشا اللہ اپنا مزید کلام بھی آپ کے ذوقِ مطالعہ کی نذر کرونگا۔
نیاز مشرب
،م۔م۔مغل

[raafi]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

bahut khoob......

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat shukriya rafi SaaHib.

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

aray wah mughal sahab..cha gay hain aap:thmbup:
buhat hi umdah..really buhat achi poetry ki ha aap nay..
iss koshishh ko jaari rakhain..aor hamaray saath sharing bhi kertay rehiyay..
Allah aapko khush rahay.ameen

[Z.]

[*Hijab*]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

very well written, keep sharing your nice posts with us, khush rahiye:)

[withlove]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Tishna kami hi jab muqadar ho
pyas bujhti hai kab samandar se

wahhhhhhhh.. janab-e-mughal sahib.. kya hi kehnay.. pehli baar aap ko parhnay ka itefaq hua.. aur yaqeen janiye lutf aa gaya.. dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye..mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Tishna kami hi jab muqadar ho
pyas bujhti hai kab samandar se

wahhhhhhhh.. janab-e-mughal sahib.. kya hi kehnay.. pehli baar aap ko parhnay ka itefaq hua.. aur yaqeen janiye lutf aa gaya.. dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye..mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

waki bohat khob ghazal khe hey ...............

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

aray wah mughal sahab..cha gay hain aap:thmbup:
buhat hi umdah..really buhat achi poetry ki ha aap nay..
iss koshishh ko jaari rakhain..aor hamaray saath sharing bhi kertay rehiyay..
Allah aapko khush rahay.ameen

buhat shukriya' sher ALii..

niyaazmand

miim miim mughal :blush:

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat shukriya' piyaaray SaaHib. / Saahiba'

aap nay pasandiidgii kaa iZhaar farmaayaa.

miim miim mughal :)

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

very well written, keep sharing your nice posts with us, khush rahiye:)

buhat shukriya. sadiya

apnii tlaash jaarii rakkh'iay...

aap kay liay naik du'aa'aiN..
:jazak: