Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Tishna kami hi jab muqadar ho
pyas bujhti hai kab samandar se

wahhhhhhhh.. janab-e-mughal sahib.. kya hi kehnay.. pehli baar aap ko parhnay ka itefaq hua.. aur yaqeen janiye lutf aa gaya.. dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye..mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

:jazak:
buhat shukriya' piyaaray SaaHaib..
ye'h sab aap kaa Husn-e-sukhan hay ..
wagarana' man na danam failatun faailat.

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

waki bohat khob ghazal khe hey ...............

buhat shukriya Alii. SaaHiab..

Taalib-e-dua;
miim miiim mughal

[Life is Alone]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

bohat zaberdastt janab...pehli koshih hi bohat hi zaberdast hai..:)
keep sharingg...

[tabish]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

very nice

[Hashim Raza]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

mm mughal sahab adaab
bohot khoob kalaam
har sher khosurat
khush rahin
keep sharing..

[aabi2cool]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

wah wah wah bohat khoob maza aagay aik taweel arsay bad koi such main acha kalam parha sari ghazal hi shahkar aur maqta to lajwab hy bilkul aaj kal k halaat ki drusat akkasi.

buj rahay hain mughal gharon k chiragh
aik roshan khial k shar se
:salam::salam::salam:

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat umda lhika hai ap nay..

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

bohat zaberdastt janab...pehli koshih hi bohat hi zaberdast hai..:)
keep sharingg...

jnaab-e-lagan

aadaab-o-slaam-e-masnoon

pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal hay janaab .. naachiiz qariiban ArS'a 12 saal say she'r-osukhan say waabasta' hay. ab choonka'e maiN bazm maiN nayaa hooN
is liay mujhay issay samajhnay maiN diqqat paish aatii hay. maiN diigar buhat sii sites par mod. hooN .. is kay E'laava aik forum meraa apnaa bhii hay jiskaa maiN ADMIN hooN.. yahii vaja' hay ke' mujhay yahaAN aanay maiN waqt lag gyaa. aap mujhy link irssal kar diijiay maiN inshaa allah apnaa mukamal t'aaruf paish kardooNga .

niyaaz mand
miim miim mughal
(karachi-pakistan)

[shummu]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

wah bhai tussi itthe wi ..ab ye mat kahiyega wah behen tussi itthe wi ha ha ha :khi:

waqaii aap ko yahan BHI dekh kar bahut bahut khushi hui ..meri jaanib se dili khushaamadeed :rose

aur khaaskar aapka kalaam paRhke to mazaa hi aa gaya..kitna umda likhte hain jo ke aap ki qadr ul uloomi ka jeeta jaagta saboot hai ..bahut khoob...dheron daad haazir hai..aayenda bhi yahan kuch na kuch share karte rahiyega....:)

Adaab!

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat shukria dosto. merii id hii kaam nahaii kar rahii thi..
inshaa allah ab mraaslat rahy gii ..wasslaam

[م۔م۔مغل]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat shukria shammu behnaa..

[saraah]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

buhat shukria dosto. merii id hii kaam nahaii kar rahii thi..
inshaa allah ab mraaslat rahy gii ..wasslaam

asslmaoalikum mughal bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii pachanyaaaaaaaaaaa ?????:fly:

[thefire1]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Wah Miim Miim Mughal sahab, kia baat hay sach main itna khoobsurat kalaam bohat arsay baad paRhna naseeb hua, kia andaz-e-bayan hay, iss ghazal main sab kuch tou paish kar dia aap nay, apni daastan-e-hayaat kay saath saath halat-e-hazra ka tabsura, wah kamal ka likha hay, har aik shaair apnay andar aik mukammal kahani liye baitha hay, bas uss ghour-O-fikar ki zarorat hay jo aap nay yeh likhtay huay ki... bohat qareeb say aap nay zindagi aur halaat ka mushahida kia hay aur waqayi nihat saadgi aur pooray insaaf kay saath aap nay apnay alfaz qalamband kiye hain...

Apnay khoosburat andaz-e-bayan aur khoobsurat soch say humain mustafeed kartay rahain, hum jaisay naaqis aqal log iss say bohat kuch seekhnay aur samajhnay ki koshish kartay hain...

Khush rahyeh :rose

aap aHbaab kii raa'ay kaa intiZaar rahy gaa.

niyaaz mand

miim miim mughal

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Pegham par merii pehlii Ghazal )3M)

Assalam o Alaikum wr wb...

Bohat umdah andaz-e-bayan hai aap ka mashAllah se...
Pahli baar hi itna khoobsorat likha hai aap ne kay tareef kay lian alfaz hi nahi hain...
Likhtay rahain aur apna khoobsorat kalam hum se share kartay rahain...
Khush rahain...