Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

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Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

Pari ji ... aap ki pehli kawish nazar se guzri.. shehre-e-wafa se shuru hua safar bohat jald ajnabhi sheher ke ajnabi rasto'n tak pohancha dala... mohabbat ke aaghaz ko mohabbat ke anjaam se eik hi nazam ki chand satoor main beyaan ker dala.. goya daria ko koozay main band kerna chaha.. go ke pehli uraan .. per hoslo'n main jo uthan ... wo buland-i-parwazz ka nishaan... mohabbat ik laq-o-daq sehra hai.. iss main kahee'n nakhlistaan bhi hein aur kayee veeranay bhi.... so nazam ko thora phela lijiye... afkaar barhay ga... mashq jari rakhiye .. ke nikhar barhay ga.. yaqeenan .. aap ki doosri kawish jald hi nazar se guzray gi ... aur pichlay tajrubaat ka nichor bhi ho gi... intazar rahay ga.. abb tak ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

salam
actully meine first time likha na to samajh nhi aya k agay kia likhon.....waise thodi asan urdu use kar lia karin :cc:

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

Khudaya ye kaisa zmana hai aya
Kay DADI ko poetry ka shoq honay laga hai :lol

Salamzz DADI u ki poem GUD hai pehli pehli kay hisab say dekha jayay to buhat achi hai coz flow lose nahien kiya u nay ... Ab likhti raho aur jo Frrukh Bhai (With Love) nay mshwara diya hai osper amal kero
ShAnI :rose

mein ap ka wait kar rahi thi k apse correction karwaoungi but ap to kafi dino se online hi nhi a rahe the meine phir sagar bhia ko check karwa dia ........waise mujhe pata tha k ap mazaak zaroor banainge mera :zuban:

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

Jo sapnay sajaye thay Palkon per,kar k raiza raiza un ko,
Woh Meri ankhon mein ansoo sajanay laga hai

CTGR8 aap ne achi koshish hey, aap boht khoob likh sakti hein bass thori see rahnumai ki zaroorat hey aap ko. Ager aap likhnay k bahd apni kawishein Mohatram QASSIM Saahb ya WITHLOVE JI ko check karwa liya karein (ager in dono ko koi ehtraz nah ho) to aap ki salahiyyatein nikher ker samnay aa sakti hein.

Umeed hey k aap yeh silsalah jari rakhein gi.inshaAllah!

ap karingi na meri rehnumai :eye:

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

ahaaa cheeena chanda bahut hi zabardast nazam share ki hai keep sharing:clap: :clap: :phool: :phool:

thanku sweet jee :phool:

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

ap karingi na meri rehnumai :eye:

Chanda mein to khud abhi SEEKHNAY k marhalay se guzar rhi hoon, phir bhi koshish keroon gi .:)

[sheem]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

hmm achi likhi hai cheena tum ne nazam :x

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

Chanda mein to khud abhi SEEKHNAY k marhalay se guzar rhi hoon, phir bhi koshish keroon gi .:)

awww...........chalein phir kabhi Koshish karye ga :phool: :eye:

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Mere Sapnon Mein Koi Anay Laga Hai

hmm achi likhi hai cheena tum ne nazam :x

shukriya :rose