Tarhii ghazal

[:Qassim:]

Aadaab Dosto!















Ghazal:










Kee tasavvur meN tirii tasveer jab


Iss se baRhker aur kuch kehnaa naheiN


Matlabii dunya kii rangat dekh lo


ChhoRker jab se gayaa hamko tabeeb


Ishq meN girtay rahay ubhray naheiN


Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim: be.panaah

[Yaaram]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Bohat khoobsurat koshish ki hay aapne ...lekan aik baat note kar lein plzzzzz ke aayinda kisi bhi forum ka zikar na karein as in words...

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Bohat khoobsurat koshish ki hay aapne ...lekan aik baat note kar lein plzzzzz ke aayinda kisi bhi forum ka zikar na karein as in words...

Salaam

Sab se pehlay to ghazal pasand kernay ka shukria ... Aur doosrii baat yeh k Yaaram sahab jab tarhii ghazal share kertay haiN to thoRa saa background dayna paRta hai uss k baare meN ...! :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

janab qasim bahi buhat khoob ,, ya ghazal pehlay phari theee , phir say phar kar buhat acha laga ..

khush rahoo :)

[muskaan]

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

janab qasim bahi buhat khoob ,, ya ghazal pehlay phari theee , phir say phar kar buhat acha laga ..

khush rahoo :)

Salaam

Bhai iss se pehlay aap ne isay kaise paRh.lee? Yeh to pehlii martaba kaheiN per bhii post ker raha hooN maiN ... :cc:

Waise pasand kernay ka shukria :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Salaam

Aapii kisi aur k comment aane ka yaqeen hona aik taraf aur aapka comment aane ka yaqeen aik taraf :eye:

Thanx for the kind words :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[muskaan]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Salaam

Aapii kisi aur k comment aane ka yaqeen hona aik taraf aur aapka comment aane ka yaqeen aik taraf :eye:

Thanx for the kind words :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

wsalaam aur salaam qassim :phool:

ye yakeen to hamesha apnai sath rakhna kai tumhari aapi hamesha comment dai gi tumhein :rose

bauhat khush raho tum aur yehi dua hai kai zindagi mein bauhat tarakki karo ameen sum ameen :rose

[withlove]

Re: Tarhii ghazal




Hai karam Maalik ka


Bohat umdaah.. bohat khoob.. Qassim sahib.. iss baar bhi bohat hi umdah qalam laye hein.. tarhi misray sungg khoob saath nibhaya.. ghazal ka her shair khoob bhaya... Share kernay ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim: be.panaah



Bohat umdaah.. bohat khoob.. Qassim sahib.. iss baar bhi bohat hi umdah qalam laye hein.. tarhi misray sungg khoob saath nibhaya.. ghazal ka her shair khoob bhaya... Share kernay ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

Salaam

Janaab Withlove aapka comment hamesha dil khuSh ker k rakh dayta hai :eye:

Itnay achchhay alfaaz istaymaal kerna ka shukria janaab :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

['SamRazi']

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Aadaab Dosto!








Ishq meN girtay rahay ubhray naheiN


Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim: be.panaah

Buhut khoob likha hai, pasand aaya :thmbup:


thnx for sharing:rose

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Buhut khoob likha hai, pasand aaya :thmbup:


thnx for sharing:rose

Adaab arz hai Shaheen sahiba!

Ghazal kii pasandeedgii k liay aapka mamnuun hooN :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Tarhii ghazal



Qassim Saahb aap ki ghazal k chand ash'har to perhtay hi dil mein utar gaye, boht sacha aur khara likhtay hein aap. Allah se dua hey k woh aap k qalam ki sachai ko kabhi ruswa nah honay day, ameen:)

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Kee tasavvur meN tirii tasveer jab


Iss se baRhker aur kuch kehnaa naheiN


Matlabii dunya kii rangat dekh lo


Qassim Saahb aap ki ghazal k chand ash'har to perhtay hi dil mein utar gaye, boht sacha aur khara likhtay hein aap. Allah se dua hey k woh aap k qalam ki sachai ko kabhi ruswa nah honay day, ameen:)

Salaam

Muskan sahiba aadaab arz hai ... Yeh to aap ki zarra navaazii hai k iss ghareeb ki ghazal aapko pasand aa'ee :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Tarhii ghazal

Assalam.o.aleikum

Qasim ji aap ka yeh kalaam bouhat pasand aaya hay khaas towr par yeh Maqtaa

Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim:

khush rahiye aur likhtay rahiye.:)