~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

[kanch ki mehroo]

salam. kuch arsa pehlay aik ghazal parhi thi...bohat achi lagi thi...to usi ki zameen par kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai....bardasht kijiye ga.

~*~ aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye

hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye

mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab

ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye

rukhsat huwi hain gham ki baharain usi ke sath

seenay pay teer khaye zamanay guzar gaye

banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN

ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye

kal aainay ko daikh kar khayal sa aaya

chehra mujhe sajaye zamanay guzar gaye

ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko

mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye

sardi ki shaam main kabhi tarrace pe baith kar

"coffee" tujhe pilaye zamanay guzar gaye

ungli ko munh main daab ke, sharma ke daf'atan

chehra mujhe chupaye zamanay guzar gaye

aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab

aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...

apki aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

[Berhi_Bee]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

hay nice 1

[muskaan]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

mein pehlai tumhari ye ghazal parh chuki hoon dubara parh kar aur bhi achi lagi hai /yhug

bauhat khush raho bacha :x

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

salam. kuch arsa pehlay aik ghazal parhi thi...bohat achi lagi thi...to usi ki zameen par kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai....bardasht kijiye ga.

~*~ aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye
mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab
ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye
rukhsat huwi hain gham ki baharain usi ke sath
seenay pay teer khaye zamanay guzar gaye
banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN
ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye
kal aainay ko daikh kar khayal sa aaya
chehra mujhe sajaye zamanay guzar gaye
ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko
mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye
sardi ki shaam main kabhi tarrace pe baith kar
"coffee" tujhe pilaye zamanay guzar gaye
ungli ko munh main daab ke, sharma ke daf'atan
chehra mujhe chupaye zamanay guzar gaye
aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab
aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...

apki aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye
mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab
ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye

Buhat khoob mehroo ,, buhat acha likha hai ,, buhat sii daad qabool karoo .:)

khush rahoo :rose

[kanwal]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

salam. kuch arsa pehlay aik ghazal parhi thi...bohat achi lagi thi...to usi ki zameen par kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai....bardasht kijiye ga.

~*~ aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye
mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab
ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye
rukhsat huwi hain gham ki baharain usi ke sath
seenay pay teer khaye zamanay guzar gaye
banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN
ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye
kal aainay ko daikh kar khayal sa aaya
chehra mujhe sajaye zamanay guzar gaye
ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko
mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye
sardi ki shaam main kabhi tarrace pe baith kar
"coffee" tujhe pilaye zamanay guzar gaye
ungli ko munh main daab ke, sharma ke daf'atan
chehra mujhe chupaye zamanay guzar gaye
aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab
aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...

apki aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye

aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab
aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...


:rose :rose
bohat bohat umdah kalam hey mehroo parh kar bas lutf hi aa gya hey har har shair dilnasheen hey aur pukhta kalam hey tumhara khuda tumhari likhny ki salahiyat ko aur barhaye amen :rose khush raho:)

[:Qassim:]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

salam. kuch arsa pehlay aik ghazal parhi thi...bohat achi lagi thi...to usi ki zameen par kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai....bardasht kijiye ga.

~*~ aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye
mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab
ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye
rukhsat huwi hain gham ki baharain usi ke sath
seenay pay teer khaye zamanay guzar gaye
banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN
ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye
kal aainay ko daikh kar khayal sa aaya
chehra mujhe sajaye zamanay guzar gaye
ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko
mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye
sardi ki shaam main kabhi tarrace pe baith kar
"coffee" tujhe pilaye zamanay guzar gaye
ungli ko munh main daab ke, sharma ke daf'atan
chehra mujhe chupaye zamanay guzar gaye
aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab
aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...

apki aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Salaam

Mehroo iss ko pehlii martaba paRh.ker bohot pasand kiya ... Aur ab phir dubara paRh.ker aur hii lutf aaya ... Itnii khoobsurat taKhleeq per daad qubool kero :phool: :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

omg.......mehrooooooooo.......itna acha kaise likh layti ho tum......:rose

[perfectly_created]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN
ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye


ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko
mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye

saari k saari ghazal hee waise to mazbuut khayaalaat ko manzuum kiye huwe hai lekin ooper k muntakhib ash'aar bohat achhe lage. bohat lutf aaya paR kar Mehroo. ye "banjar" wala sher to jaise zehan par naqsh ho gaya ho.

phuuT nikleeN to ka_ii shahr.e.tamanna Duube
aik qatre ko tarasti hu_ii banjar aaNkhaiN

khuda aap ki kaavishoN meiN mazeed nikhaar peda kare ~ Ameen! :rose

[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

Bohat jandar gahzal likhi hay aapne kaanch ki mehroo bohat khoob ......Shabsh :)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: ~*~ aaja...ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

salam. kuch arsa pehlay aik ghazal parhi thi...bohat achi lagi thi...to usi ki zameen par kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai....bardasht kijiye ga.

~*~ aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye ~*~

us say kaho ke aaye, zamanay guzar gaye
hontoN ko muskuraye zamanay guzar gaye
mehroomiyoN ke daur main kuch hasratoN ke khuwab
ankhoN main la basaye zamanay guzar gaye
rukhsat huwi hain gham ki baharain usi ke sath
seenay pay teer khaye zamanay guzar gaye
banjar si ho gaii hai mere dil ki sar zameeN
ankhoN ko khooN bahaye zamanay guzar gaye
kal aainay ko daikh kar khayal sa aaya
chehra mujhe sajaye zamanay guzar gaye
ab roshni kahan say milay gi jahan ko
mujh ko jigar jalaye zamanay guzar gaye
sardi ki shaam main kabhi tarrace pe baith kar
"coffee" tujhe pilaye zamanay guzar gaye
ungli ko munh main daab ke, sharma ke daf'atan
chehra mujhe chupaye zamanay guzar gaye
aaja ke haar maan li meri anaa ne ab
aaja ke sar jhukaye zamanay guzar gaye...

apki aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

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