Insaano ki dunya

[Z.]

wo kehtey kyun ho
Jo poora nahi kertey
Ehsaas dilatey kyun ho
jab khud ehsaas nahi rakhtey
tanhai sey nikaalney ki koshish bhi phir mat karo
jab sathi bhi tum ban nahi saktey
tum kya jano lafzoN ki ehmiyat ko
tum kya jano rishtoN ko aur Na'toN ko
yunheeN jeeney do mujhey meyri hi sochoN mey

Xenya

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

bohot khoobsoorat alfaaz may apnay khiyaalaat ko dhaalaa hai,keep writing and share with us sisterthmbup:

[Wafa]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

bohot khoobsurat nazam hai...kaafi simple aur attractive...aur designing bhi sach mai bohot pasand aaye....khush raho...:phool:

[ahsaas]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

Buhat umdah ...Lafzon ka buhat acha istimaal

[*Rida*]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

dear ......koi kab tak chup sakta hai is dunya say.....
poem tu buht achi hai.........aur talkh bhi...

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

very good jee..!
achi wording the..
keep sharing

[zmufti]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

bloo saheba
aap ki nazm ka khayal pasand aayaa
albata nazm meN behtari ki gunjaayish maujood hai
agar aap ko nazm kehne ka shoq hai to Saahir ludhayanvi, Parveen shakir, Aitbaar saajid aur farhat abbas shah ko paRhiye
paRhte waqt yeh dekhiye keh vo apne jazbaat ko ilfaaz meN kaise dhaalte heN
inshallah aap ke kalaam meN behari aa jaaye gi
khush rahiye
zmufti

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

bohat khoob

[GumShuda]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

hmm nice (Y)

[Hashim Raza]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

bohot khoob
keep it up and on...

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

Bahoot khoob
Very nice

[La'hasil]

Re: Insaano ki dunya

Hmmmm Buhat Khooob .....