Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam


ho gaye jab sey ajnabi saahib
zindagi main hai tergii saahib

muskuraaney ki chaah main aksar
aankh main aa gayee nami sahib

aap aur aap ke sabhee vaade
mushkilon meiN hai zindagi sahib

aap key dam sey yun darakhshaaN hun
chaand key dam sey chaandni saahib

ik musalsal azaab lagti hai
aur kia hai ye zindagi saHib

yoon takalluf se aap ka milna
jaise milte hain ajnabi saahib

fatima rabb se aur kia chaahe?
"aap aur aap ki khushi saahib"

[Masood]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

aslaam_u_alikam


ho gaye jab sey ajnabi saahib
zindagi main hai tergii saahib

muskuraaney ki chaah main aksar
aankh main aa gayee nami sahib

aap aur aap ke sabhee vaade
mushkilon meiN hai zindagi sahib

aap key dam sey yun darakhshaaN hun
chaand key dam sey chaandni saahib

ik musalsal azaab lagti hai
aur kia hai ye zindagi saHib

yoon takalluf se aap ka milna
jaise milte hain ajnabi saahib

fatima rabb se aur kia chaahe?
"aap aur aap ki khushi saahib"

ZABARDAST :phool: :phool: :phool:
Main hamesha yehi kehta chala aaya hoon keh fatimah aap jab bhi is mehfil mein aati hain bohat khoobsurati sey aatin hain. Is ghazal ki kya tareef karoon? woh ehsaasat jo ham jaisey insaan kabhi na kah sakein woh aap ney chand alfaaz men pro kar rakh diyey hain. Daad qabool kijiye MashaAllah.

[Yaaram]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

Bohat pyari ghazal likhi hay .Allah nazr-e-bad se bachey ......likhti rahein aur khush rehin :)

[La'hasil]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

Buhat Khoobsurat Fatimah :rose


buhat acha likha hai aap nay :)


khush rahyeah :)

[Wasi]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

Salam...

Behad purlutf ghazal.... Nihayat umdhigi se likha hey ... buhat tareef wosool kijiyeh.....

Shabbash...:)

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

bohut khoobsoorat,,,,,,,,,,khush raheyey sadda:rose

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

wahhhhhhhhhh...bohat khooob likha hai apne:)

khush rahiye

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

W salaam,


waaah bahooot khooob bahooot hi umdeh aur zabardast likhaa hai chhoooti tumnien her sher hi umdeh aur zabrdast hai khoob likhti raho din b din tumhaare likhnien mien nikhaar aataa jaarahaa hai daad qabool karo khush raho :rose :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

fatima rabb se aur kia chaahe?
"aap aur aap ki khushi saahib"


Aik bar phir khoobsurat se kalaam k sath jalwahgar ka shukriya, aap unn members mein se hein jin ka humein humesha intezar rehta hey k kub pyaray se kalaam k sath hazir hotay hein. Thanx again Fatima:rose

[muskaan]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

bauhat hi khubsurti sai jazboon ko lafzoon ka rang diya hai aap nai :) simple beautiful :)

khush rahiyai aur likhti rahiyai :)

[ShAnI]

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aslaam_u_alikam


ho gaye jab sey ajnabi saahib
zindagi main hai tergii saahib

muskuraaney ki chaah main aksar
aankh main aa gayee nami sahib

aap aur aap ke sabhee vaade
mushkilon meiN hai zindagi sahib

aap key dam sey yun darakhshaaN hun
chaand key dam sey chaandni saahib

ik musalsal azaab lagti hai
aur kia hai ye zindagi saHib

yoon takalluf se aap ka milna
jaise milte hain ajnabi saahib

fatima rabb se aur kia chaahe?
"aap aur aap ki khushi saahib"

Wsalam
kya hain alfaz kya rawani hai
Khoob likhi ahi ye ghazal sahib :)

Hamesha Muskurati rahiyay

ShAnI :rose

[withlove]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

muskuraaney ki chaah main aksar
aankh main aa gayee nami sahib

aap aur aap ke sabhee vaade
mushkilon meiN hai zindagi sahib

kamal likha...Fatimah ji ... chand din pehlay hi aap ki ye ghazal kahe'n aur parhi ... aur tabb to iss qadar doobay ke kuch keh na paye.. magar aaj aap ko yahan pa ker be'intaha khushi bhi huyee ke aap se rahnuma-o-mash'al bardar bhi mojood hein..aur ye moqa bhi haath se na janay diya.. so aaj aap se hum kalaam ho hi gaye... Bohat hi qabil-e-satayish ghazal kahi ...Bohat si daad ki mustahiq hein aap .. so daad hazir hai .. Bohat Shukria.. Mazeed ka intazar rahay ga...:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

Bohot Khoob... :thmbup:
Share karnai ka bohot shuqria.:rose
keep smiling

[Fatima Asad]

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ZABARDAST :phool: :phool: :phool:
Main hamesha yehi kehta chala aaya hoon keh fatimah aap jab bhi is mehfil mein aati hain bohat khoobsurati sey aatin hain. Is ghazal ki kya tareef karoon? woh ehsaasat jo ham jaisey insaan kabhi na kah sakein woh aap ney chand alfaaz men pro kar rakh diyey hain. Daad qabool kijiye MashaAllah.

aslaam_u_alikam

masood sahib yeh kuch zayada hi ho gayaa. aap key kalam main MASHALLAH jo nikhaar hey wo yahan kahan. aap ko merii yeh koshish pasand aayii main bohat mumnoon hun.
shukriya

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Aap aur aap ki khushi saahib

Bohat pyari ghazal likhi hay .Allah nazr-e-bad se bachey ......likhti rahein aur khush rehin :)

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat shukriya yaaram sahib